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If you ever do get around to publishing this, I'll sure as hell buy it. I could, and have, read this over and over again because of its awesomeness.

NOOOOOO! no! oh gawd, no! i really liked the story, but then, then the most terrible thing happened. i read the author note in chapter 13. i didn't know you were going to have them be switchers! i definitly thought Anthony would be on top. and i absolutley cannot stand switching positions. call me old fashion but i like my tops to stay on top, that is, of course, unless my bottom gets frisky and tops from the bottom. know what i mean? oh well, i loved the story while it lasted. although, for the record, Anthony was kind of a bitch with all his whining and crying, so i should've expected him to be bottom sooner or later.

Like I'd ever get my hopes up to see a threesome in this story. lol X3

Moving on, Emmy really knows how to handle Shawn. I'm impressed, seriously. =3 Even though her advice didn't really go anywhere. X3 As for Anthony, I bet five 'net bucks that I know what he's going to tell Brett. I just hope it helps. *crosses fingers*

oh god i love you! and i love the last sentence of the PAN. I FINALLY READ IT! are you happy with me?

i really hope that shawn doesn't get caught by the jocks...i hate awkward moments...

i really don't know what to say about the chapters other than GREAT JOB!! you always make me laugh!

ASOTA

Okaaay. I think I know what's going on. Brett broke up with someone and is having a breakdown??

Or something? Or my guess is really off... :/

Hmmm what's next?

what no threesome...aw man...just kidding...interesting chapter. anthony's aunt was really good to shawn, now if only he would listen to her...so i'm really wondering about brett's depression...as far as an epilogue goes, i think that would be great. i would love to know how these characters end up...thanks for the update!

Great chapter. Emmy was at her best dealing with Shawn. I can't wait to see the confessions between Brett and Anthony. I hope Shawn does not get caught spying on them but maybe he will get a hint at what is going on in Anthony's heart. Very good chapter. Very intense look at Shawn's emotional turmoil.

Well, now I can't help but wonder what Brett's secret is that's made him so emotional, but I'll refrain from idle speculation. You sure there won't be any threesome? Please? Though it'd probably come off as pretty narmtastic. Not that there's anything wrong with that.

I keep waiting for Shawn to develop some sort of redeeming quality, but it looks like I will keep waiting. What? Is he just gonna sit there and spy on Brett and Anthony and wait to get caught by Keith and Liz or whoever else? Yeah, Anthony will be real impressed with Shawn then. I take it Anthony is going to come out to Brett, which is a big step since he's still telling everythone else, including Shawn, that he's straight. I think its a good idea, though. It will probably help Brett.

Shawn is having hard times again. Perhaps it would be good for him to find somewhere else to live. It might improve relations with his Mom as well as give him some more privacy for one on one with Anthony. Speaking of Anthony, he is off in his own world. I think he deserves a good ass kicking from Shawn. I can't help but worry for Shawn. He is being hounded at home by his mom. She doesn't seem to know when to lay off. Also the person he is in love with is playing mind games with his head. Anthony will not even admit that he is gay in private. That must be taking a toll on Shawn. I hope they can work thing out together. I really don't want to see them separate especially not for a long time.