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for Black Star Cross

by GreatMasterM

schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are we finally going to get some Shawn and Anthony monkey loving? I hope so. And, I'm pumped of course. A little sad to see the story coming to an end, but I'm looking forward to reading it again straight through, once its done.
person Anon
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay for updates! sorry i haven't talked in awhile... my computer had a virus, and i was busy. now, thankfully, my computer is virus-free!

peter should have known better than to do that! lol. can't wait for the next chapter!

ASOTA
person Holly
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow awesome now you shall be updating sooner : ) I am glad to hear that! but I am also a little sad that 'Black Star Cross' is coming to an end.....
As always I look forward to reading more chapters, and I have recommended your story to a couple of my friends!
So I hope you get the number of hits you want.
Also thank you so much for responding to my review personally, it made me really happy ^_^
Well keep up the good work!

~Holly~
person tigereyes
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story and I read it in about 4 hrs. I just couldn't stop. I love it, it's like being back in high school all over again. I was basically Shawn except without the whole " the world is out to get me" thing. Give me more!!!
person Kuromei
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol Chess. X3 I like how the rook and the knight took out the queen at the end (I leave it to you to figure out which dude is which). I'm sorry, but I'm not going to miss Peter. He should've known something would happen if he stuck his nose that far into other people's business. Especially in high school. XP

..... I think I've developed the first case of reviewer's block. O_o; I can't think of anything else to comment on. Well, nothing that would be relevant and non-rambly, anyway. XP See you in a few days, Sage!

person Raven
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I read the last chapter of your story. It was good in the begenning, but then around chapter 35, It all started to blend in. The characters are a little too predictable for me at least. When you make a character, don't make him/her cliche, make them diffrent. Just my review.

Read StarFist, those are real characters.
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...Peter is annoying, but I can't help but feel a bit sorry for him. I mean, he's just trying to be his own fabulous self. But then he is doing it by forcing his own openess on others. Still...
person Holly
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi there :) hmm what can I possibly tell you in this review...
Well I started reading 'Black Star Cross' about two weeks ago and I instantly fell in love with it :) normally if I really liked a story I would rush through it and possibly finish it in one day, but I wanted to take my time with your story...so that's what I did and I think I enjoyed it a lot better than I probably would've if I had rushed through it.
Man I love this story! and I adore all the characters and thank you soo much for not putting so much detail into each characters appearance, because I do like to picture the characters in my own way and I'm glad you understand that.
Well I don't want to make this too long so...
I look forward to the next chapter and I will wait patiently for it! Your Awesome :)

Your Fan
~Holly~
person Kuromei
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He.... He said it. O____O Anthony said those three little words! *feels faint* I didn't think that'd happen until the last or next-to-last chapter. Color me pleasantly surprised.

Well, now that the break-up is over, what the hell is going to happen next? With only five more chapters, what else could happen? Seeing as how my fic ended at 18 chapters, I'd say that's a good indication as to how stumped I am. XP

Of course, I'm staying tunde for every single update, right until the end. ;3
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Of course I'm squeeling with delight over this chapter. I kinda feel now like it doesn't matter if Shawn has any redeeming qualitiies, because the Anthony Shawn duo make up for it all.