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Well. . . I can't say very much happened this chapter, but you warned as much if I remember correctly. It was very ending-like, without being too closing, or something like that. What I mean to say, I guess, is that it had an air of finality to it, but not too much of one. Basically, it felt like a good ending ought to. Still can't wait for the epilogue, though.

I just finished chapter 44, and OMFG, Abecrombie and Shit shirt!!!! You are hysterical!!!!! Seriously dude, you are too fucking funny.

On a sad note tho, even tho Brett is a minor character, (and a jock, no less), I don't want to see him hurt. Suicidal feelings for anyone, are horrible. My oldest has a friend who has tried suicide a few times (I know, a cry for help). But it is truly scary when you visit the kid in the hospital. Anyway, hopefully Brett will come out of this ok and we'll find out what could be so bad that he would want to end it all.

As always, Sage, GREAT storytelling!

Oh, and btw: do we EVER get to find out who the hell sent Shawn the rose and the note?????? I'm too fucking curious. And how come Shawn hasn't been scouring the halls, classrooms, cafteria for some fat dude who's watching him???????? That's what I would have been doing!

Hey Sage, just read the A/N at the beginning of the Plunge chapter. How's your cat doing? I hope she's ok. Last summer, one of my cats was attacked by a coyote and I rushed her to the emergency vet. $1,000 later, she's fine. Thank God. I really hope your cat, Cat pulls through. I'll be thinking of her...Oh, and I also have a lab (3 cats) and luckily Jessie, my lab, gets along extremely well w/the 3 cats. Good luck w/Cat Sage.

I didn't even read the chapter yet, just wanted to wish Cat a speedy recovery.

Hey. I've been reading your story since last week, when I only thought it went to chapter 5!!!!!! (Obviously I need glasses, and didn't see the one after the five!!!!) Anyways, by the end of chapter 5 I was hooked, so I've been reading a little bit everyday. I'm on chapter 37 I think, or 38, when Shawn finally blows Anthony. I wasn't gonna comment on the story until I was through reading it, but I was laughing so fucking hard when I read the dick snot comment! I know all your readers have read this chapter a LONG, LONG, LONG time ago, but I had to comment. I couldn't read any further, the tears were pouring down my face. I think that was the funniest thing I ever read! Actually many things Shawn says or comments on are hysterical; there was a monologue he was giving Keith a few chapters back that I was cracking up. I think he was telling Keith that Anthony was so afraid to be seen kissing Shawn b/c then he would automatically turn into a limp-wristed, lisping, bottom loving fag. It was priceless!

Anyway, this is such a GREAT story, but seriously dude, Shawn and Anthony argue WAY TOO much, especially when they're alone. Less arguing and more playing!

I know I just reviewed on a chapter you wrote a LONG assed time ago, but would it be horrible to give a shout-out (sorta) to another of your reviewers/writers? Is that bad? I just wanted to ask JulianYes if he's ever gonna continue his awesome Henry Rollins story? It was one of the first I ever read on this site.

Anyway, sorry Sage, I didn't mean to take away from your story. You know when you get into a story and then you never see it again? I just wanted to ask.

Ok, well, your story is quite amazing and I'm gonna go back now and read where I left off.

And sorry again, I didn't mean to offend you.

Well, I have to say that I'm pretty sad to come to the end of the Shawn/Anthony saga. I'm not a fan of wrap up chapters, in general, but...meh, its Shawn and Anthony, so its not like I can look away. I look forward to the epilogue.

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I liked it. I liked it a lot. 0/////0

.... Dude, what else can I say? Um.... Awesome chapter, looking forward to the next one and the epilogue. ^w^ Yeah, I think that covers it. Now, if you'll excuse me... *leaves the room*

Ooh, was not expecting for them to take turns like that, but it makes sense in context. And I shall excuse the lack of condoms because of your vehement protestations in the AN. Nice sex, by the way. Quite fun to read, and I certainly can't wait till the next chapter.

They had a penis measuring contest? LMAO. Yay they did the deed! Now they can begin a life of non stop sex now that they have discovered what it is like, they can begin a life of non stop round the clock smex! I hope you will give us occasional oneshots or I will really miss Shawn and Anthony. They are so full of talk but they really are so innocent and endearing. I bet Shawn was in a good mood (despite his sore ass) when he finally went home. It was sweet to see them discovering sex with each other. Totally WAFF! Thanks for this great story.