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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude! I really like this. Is it wrong of me to find Anthony completely adorable... Whatever, haha. What's going on with Shawn's dad, too? I'm trying, but I cannot seem to figure that out. Shawn's dreams are a little insane, but hey, I'm liking it.
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story T_T (has to wait so long for the next chapter)
not that i don't love this (i do) I just wanted to say that Anthony's actions are becoming a bit predictable.
love ya ~kisses~
not that i don't love this (i do) I just wanted to say that Anthony's actions are becoming a bit predictable.
love ya ~kisses~
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is very intresting. And I enjoy reading it but, I need descriptions. I haven't got a clue what your characters look like. For example, are they tall or short, what color hair do they have, what color eyes do they have, etc. I think the story could be made better if you gave your readers some mental pictures of your characters.
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
come back anthony!
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg this is like the best story I have read in a really really long time.Poor Shawn stupid Anthony.
please update soon cause i:m so dying right now
and Your a guy O-o thats awsome
please update soon cause i:m so dying right now
and Your a guy O-o thats awsome
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October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude... D: I hope somebody else helps out Shawn. Poor kid... X|
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I usually write annoying reviews because they measure up to 3 paragraphs that just repeat the same message over and over but you'll be the first one to be spared from my silliness. GREAT. I'm not sarcastic. Your story really is GREAT. It's not like the usual try hard wanna be professional or feeling professional stories. It really feels like Shawn is talking to me. It's natural, free-flowing and not confusing. Can't wait for the next chaps. I know this is very inarticulate and lacks tons of proofs but believe me, for a guy like me to write an all caps single word, it says a lot.
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Come on Anthony....
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
tons of emotional termoil :)
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woot! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! *hugs*
That update was great! I loved it!
I wonder what's Shawn gonna go for the night now?
And what's up with Anthony? He always wants to run away from things... He's scared of something right?
Anyways! I can't wait to read more of this! It's all good and I love it! ^______^
Plz update again soon! *goes read ur oneshot* lol
That update was great! I loved it!
I wonder what's Shawn gonna go for the night now?
And what's up with Anthony? He always wants to run away from things... He's scared of something right?
Anyways! I can't wait to read more of this! It's all good and I love it! ^______^
Plz update again soon! *goes read ur oneshot* lol