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The way they are going, there won't be a top and a bottom when they get to doing anything for a first time:) Overall, Anthony would probably feel better assuming a traditional top role. He'd be too insecure to try anything else. Shawn seems more logical and open about the whole thing, plus there is a chance that he is not a virgin to himself. He could be open to the idea of being a bottom. On another hand, you can throw a monkey wrench in and have any sort of twist on that. Sometimes people do completely unpredictable staff out of the blue.

Yay, we discovered the secret (even if it was over a chapter ago lol, sorry for not reviewing)! Loved the new chappies, and I cant wait till Anthony fesses up. Great chapter, update soon please!!!!

i can'¨t believe shawn just forgives anthony for everything all the time. and why can't they just keep quiet about their relationship?? wouldn't that be much easier?

Wow... go Shawn!

Part 2 of Chapter 12 was awesome. Just plain awesome. ^w^

CHAPTER 12
Hi Sage,
I like your story, it's cute :) Especially the part where Shawn ran away from home. His inner thoughts are well written. It's kind of convinient that Anthony moved in with him - even temporarily as it is. I expected one of them to own some videogames, though. Like the first thing Anthony whould do would be looking for a plug to get his game system going.

Good fic so far.

Merry Xmas :D

Aws... Cute.

wow!

Well, well, well...I've finally found a high school story that is funny and doesn't have angst!! But I bet there is some to come in later chapters, damn it all! But seriously, I have been sick and tired of angsty slash because I really don't like being depressed. This fanfiction is a breath of fresh air.

OK, I'm not doing it too often now because I'm not reading much and very often I just stop in the middle ...

You held my interest so far, you developed the characters truly well, bravo for this! They seem real and even if Shawn is a whiney bitch (I like the desciption Genderless used) he seems just lie a typical teenager. An emo, overreacting teenager who thinks all evil is only happening to him, not being able to see past his nose. Ok, so he has been tormented and he's right to feel haunted but I also understand Anthony's opinions, yes, he has the image to uphold, and it's mostly because of the way his father was a soldier. That's why he 'can't be' gay, I guess.

Oh, another guess, is Shawn's father a bi? Or even a too-late discovered gay?

Anyway, back to the review; there were MANY lines that I literally laughed out loud at, and what I like about the story is that you keep it so realistic, without sugar coating and without all those things female writes commit. But you're a male so ... I envy you this ability!

On the whole, a splendid piece of writing and a fantastic read! I'll be looking forward to another part of this story!