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WOW get him!

Dun, dun, dun! I hat being caught up in a lie, so feel for Anthony right now lol. Great chapter, update soon please!!!

God it just gets better and better, but I really want to hit Anthony for playing Shawn like that. Poos Shawn. Update soon!

I think its good to give the chapters titles especially if you have read the fic for a while you can just go by the title good chap you really had me going there he's gonna do it! nearly there nearly almost dang it gone again....... oh well maybe next chap ne? good work though Kai

loved it, i cant believe you just left it there, please please please update soon i cannot wait to see what happens next.

Dude, I can understand getting pissed when you're denied getting the nookie (or close to it) that you've been dreaming about, but Shawn was pretty harsh there. O__o;; I don't think even Anthony deserved that...

And about your chapter titles, I think they're very fitting and appropriate. I can't think of chapter titles worth a crap, that's why I number all of mine. X3

Hey, I just wanted to tell you that I really loved your story. Um...I read that comment you had written to the person who disliked Shawn or whatever, and it might have been a flame or something. And I thought: I like Shawn! He reminds me of myself when I hit puberty, and I can really see where he's coming from. That time in someone's life is a bitch. But...I really do adore your story, it's very funny sometimes but so sad the next minute. I also love how you said that you kept the descriptions of your characters vague so readers could imagine them anyway they wanted. Thanks for posting it!

ohhh i love it, please update soon i cannot wait to see what happens next. this is such a good story.

Give it up anthony!

You write so beautifully and with such realism that I enjoyed every last minute of your story so far. I really do hope you continue writing just the way you have while progressing the story. The relationship between Anthony and Shawn has just the right amount of tension and I love the little things that are slipping past the barrier that Anthony has erected to separate himself from Shawn.

To answer your question, I definitely think that Anthony should be on top the first time. I just get this primal vibe from him that makes me think he'd enjoy that position the most. Keep up the great writing and I look forward to the next chapter!