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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you've got to be kidding? is he going to forgive anthony for beating him unconscious? make anthony eat anti-aggressive pills or something, i just hate abusive people, but i love your story :)
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Anthony really dishes out the hurt to Shawn!
They argue like a real couple (so they might as well
have the make-up sex also!!)
Thanks,
R
They argue like a real couple (so they might as well
have the make-up sex also!!)
Thanks,
R
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm starting to question Shawn's sanity... or maybe Anthony's. Either way, I think they're both acting like menopausal loons, going from a little tense but kind of ok, to beating the shit out of the other (or being the one having said shit pounded out), to soft little romantic caresses. Crazy. Positively crazy. Then again, they ARE teenage boys with vast amounts of sexual tension built up. So I guess it's to be expected. Wonderful story -- you have no idea how excited I get when I see it's been updated. Keep up the great work! :D
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O-K, I will. Another great chapter, even though Shawn gets beat up. Anthony is sooo cruel sometimes, damn, I thought for sure they were just gonna end up making out lol. Loved it anyway. Great chapter, update soon please!!!
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow anthonys crazy
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, what does Keith have to do with all of this? I'll wait to find out, but it's going to kill me, just so you know. X3
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just a tad to short other than that this chap was ok
The introduction of the new Character was ok almost like he's the one who's going to stop them from killing eachother good writing just not long enough to get a clear picture
Kai
The introduction of the new Character was ok almost like he's the one who's going to stop them from killing eachother good writing just not long enough to get a clear picture
Kai
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty great. I like the interaction between Anthony and Shawn--the dialogue's true to that of actual obnoxious..teenagers? I'm not sure how old they are, but early teens seems likely. Anyway, it's great.
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what! how can you just leave it there? Please update soon i cannot wait to see what happens. it was very good. update please ;)
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Is there some sort of confession in the next chapter? Yeah, I know you can't tell...but this chapter was great. :)