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for Black Star Cross

by GreatMasterM

person SODA
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Shit. Has Anthony lost his FUCKING mind?!!?! That twisted sychotic(sp?) BITCH! Wow, I wonder if its really the end...Shit. Great(actually horrible, not the way its written, but whats going on) chapter, update soon please!
person Ryukai
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
0_o I guess thats what happens when you dont stop pushing....
interesting chap
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 17

Aw Sagey, its a dream, I know it is :)
P.S. Check your chapter length. It seems cut off.
person Berlin
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eep! I'm going to guess (ok, maybe hope is a better word than guess) that this is all just a horrific dream and Anthony's not THAT sadistic.

But is the chapter meant to cut off right there? If it is, you are an evil, evil person for leaving us hanging like that! ;)
person Dreamsforever
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to know what happens..... evil evil cliffie
person Rosei
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17 "Nightmare on Memory Lane"

I know it's sick of me, but this story is addicting, so...
more, more, more, MORE, MORE!!!

Thanks,
R
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
T_T Where's the rest of the chapter? Gahh....nooo~! I wanna read more...T_T
person teeta
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Sage, I just want to tell you that the 17th chap is incomplete. There is But and then nothing, it's cut.
person Anon
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what?
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY great chapter! Finally their connecting a bit. I love how you portray Anthony's struggle with himself! Keep up the good work and update soon!