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this story is too good. Please continue it

you know up until the second chapter i was going... "something good has to happen soon." but then you went and made him an asshole to his mome. seriously that has got to be one retarded ass character you came up with. =/ His mom never did a single thing tomake him act like an asshole... and his logic is flawed and retarded. But i went and thought to myself..."oh he has just got to be pms'ng..." but oh no, you really fucked it up. You tried to do WAY too much drama for something that didn't need so much drama. Seriously. And the whole fiction is repetetive. Unbelievable. Needs to be revised completely with a critical eye. Get yourself a plot beta.

........ and im not really that mean, just annoyed cuz its 2:55 in the morning and I didnt even get SMUT for my efforts. *sigh*

hmm is he on drugs or something? or sick, hurt? it was a unexpected twist on the story though not a bad one :)

Oh, my. Poor Shawn... <=( He still doesn't deserve that kind of thing.

Waiting patiently for the next chapter,
Kuromei~

Awwww, poor Shawn. Those panic attaks must be crazy to deal with. Great chapter, update soon please!!!

AHH!!!please please tell me he was just dreaming!Cause if he's not I'm gonna start to cry.

Well. THIS is a bit of a dark turn! Certainly unexpected! I hope there's an update soon, so perhaps we can get a bit of an explanation here.

Wow...that was creepy. Amazing imagery though. But seriously dark...I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Well now the rating makes sense nice bloody chapter realisation is usually a painful thing

OMG!! As nightmares go, this poor kid had a doozy!!
(Glad the rest loaded up! BTW)

Sorry, but after that chapter, I'm going to have to beg
here for the next one!!! It's just too cruel to leave
me hanging like this!!! HA!!

Please wake Shawn up 'cause pain might be better than
his nightmare!!

Thanks,
R