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Ah, well… it’s finally been done…
Uhm well done *pat’s shawn and Anthony on the back*
Heh……
WELL WHAT THE HECK ELSE YOU WANT ME TO SAY?
Should I go blabbering “Wow that’s so hot. Phew. Blah hot. Nice. Er…” because it was just okay. The way you write a sex scene is rather different from what im used to reading online… I’d say that, your’s has a more personal feel. Like it’s not all sweet candy and hot smexy-ness. But. Well. More real?
Okay whatttt. –blinks-
But seriously dude… 2 finger’s are enough?
Then why the hell does 97% fics (that include fingering) always say 3 fingers?
Like please seriously answer this question thanks~

What an end.
Nice to do that flashback thing. Those earlier chapters now so feel like a distant memory… maybe I’ll go re-read it sometime eh? ^_________^
But hey hey, graduation. College. What’s to happen to Anthony and Shawn now? I hope they go to the same college. Else, god knows how those two are gonna keep sated. XD

Onwards young sage!!! I’ll be reading the epilogue soonn~~~

NoTE: you're probably getting all these review alerts on the same day... because i had problems w the internet n couldnt review. so they stockpiled. and boom they are here now. so yay! celebrate! xD

Hey~! xD
What’s up with the rapper/reggae -ish language man~ xD
But cool scene nonetheless. And to think I had a plot bunny similar too (er, just the punching part).
But Shawn really kicked ass in this chapter. He raged on and went physical over two jocks man! That’s something! Whooottss go shawn.
And sorry, coz like I totally forgot about the existence of his dead boyfriend (oops.) wonder if we’ll get to hear more about Heath.
So anyway, things are taking an epic twist. Missing popular people. And the nobody of school slams the jock against the lockers. Roles have been reversed. So gay’s in denial shall suddenly confess yea? xD

This is becoming very shawn centered. Not that I mind. That dude is one interesting fellow. And hey! What keith was saying about how shawn labels them is so true…
Like. Blindsided! Or something. What? Nevermind.
But hmmmmm, back at emmy’s place. What turn is this taking now.
Not to mention that anthony’s acting all “the 8 minutes by the car and the punch didn’t happen” and “oh sorry dude but like, I’ve got a suicidal buddy-brett to worry about now”… hm yea….

i've honestly been trying to find a way to review the last chapter, but i'm afraid that i may have had a mini-heart attack even after reading your warning... sorry, i tried... but back on track: YAY! I'M NOW #2!!! everyone else must go to the back of the line!!! YESSSSSSSSSSSS!!! and i love the joke about there being a PWP with me and Blue Rose...you were kidding, right?! :P

i can't wait for the PWP and the new story that i won't see FOR A YEAR!!! i guess that i'm going to not be able to read your new story for a year, but i can't help feeling excited anyway!!!

i'm saddened that this story has to come to an end, but all good things have to, right? oh well, i'll try to keep in touch over AIM and such.

I LOVE YOU! (#2)
ASOTA

THANK YOU!
Thank you for creating a Epilogue and a Monologue
Wow BSC, my favorite story is now complete..
Well first off I want to thank you so much for your effort into this story! You really made this story stand out to me and I thought you did make it really unique because it wasn't some clique story that I've seen a hundred times before.BSC had me on the edge at times, explode with laughter,and of course adore your work.I would come home from a miserable day at work but have something to brighten up my day :) Your story had me looking forward to each chapter, and of course I love how you were very consistent with your updates!
I really hope you keep up with your writing and I look forward to any of your future work!
Once again thank you for all your effort and creating such a delightful story!
~Holly~

heh To be honest, I'm not sure why I kept reading this story even though I found Shawn to be obnoxious. I guess I wanted to see what would happen in the end because for all I knew, there would be some interesting drama going on. And boy did you not disappoint. Shawn and Anthony freaking out about the prospect of classmates finding out about them comes to mind.

I like that you didn't write Shawn and Anthony's relationship as a cliché, where either Shawn or Anthony ends up as moderately more effeminate and, like you said, a female with a penis. XD Though it is true that there are quite a few authors who do this, there are also quite a few who don't. It just depends on where you're looking.

Anyway, I found your story interesting, though majority of the characters I could have cared less about...

Sage, first off, I want to thank you SO MUCH for mentioning me in your A/N from the last chapter. I feel honored. Seriously. Thanx for trying to ask Julian, oh well, such is life. The graduation chapter had me in tears at the end. During my own college graduation, I was looking up at the sky hoping my dad was looking down and proud of me, the way Shawn did. So, that brought back a lot of memories. I feel very sad now, knowing that this great story is over. I wished I knew about AFF three years ago when you started the story. I just found the website a few months ago. I thought your story to be very realistic, in the way high schoolers think and act, except for maybe Shawn's overly aggressive attitude. I loved reading each chapter; I guess I was lucky, I got to read all 51 in the span of a few days, instead of having to wait like the majority of your readers. Altho, when I read the A/N's at the beginning of the chapters, you had I think almost 3 birthdays, tons of finals and midterms, summers, it seemed I was reliving your last 3 years! So, I kinda feel like the over protective, proud parent and want to congratulate you on ALL your accomplishments and your future endeavors. You must be extremely bright to go on to grad school. If you're not majoring in writing, what is your major? You should seriously think about publishing. I know you asked that many chapters ago, I would think a story like this could be published. I would buy it! Well, this is the first story of yours that I read; I will check out the others. Unfortunately, the vampire, werewolf, outer world story doesn't do much for me, but I hope to find other "modern day" stories from you in the future. I know, not for awhile. Which makes me sad. I think you're a phenomenal writer, extremely gifted, who has a tremendous talent for writing and entertaining people w/your stories. Anyway, this is really long, but I am sad to see the story end and wish you all the luck in the future at whatever you do. Would you be able to email me when your other story is uploaded? LisaT25@msn.com Thank you Sage, good luck with everything! Oh, p.s. your shout out to Blue Rose being the only guy, I'm pretty sure Julian is a guy too! Bye, have a great summer!

A very fitting end, I'd say. Karma's a bitch, ain't it Keith? lol XD And I'm glad to see that Brett got to hook up with his redhead nerdette. ^w^

Ooooh~ The new story sounds great! OwO Stakes vs. steaks? lol I can't wait to see what other misconceptions have been made. XD And, of course, the PWP still piques my interest. ;3

I still beat you in story procrastination, Sage. Don't kid yourself. lol XD But I will agree that writing sex scenes is tough. I'm stuck on one right now. XP

Okay, now I'm just rambling. To get back on track, BSC rocked my socks from beginning to end. It was an honor to be your first stalker, and I'd be happy to continue following your work on AFF. ^w^

Be seeing ya! =D

Dude...I don't even know what to say aboutthat monologue, so I'll just leave it alone. I loved the bit at the end of the epilogue about nobody caring about Liz...truer words were never spoken. Your story reminds me bit of Tommy Hilfiger, when he designed all American clothes for the young, white boating crowds, and then his clothes became really popular with black people... Like you write this story for a gay male audience, but all we chicks are just loving on it. I get the whole realistic perspective and found it refreshing. Shawn was completely inlikeable, but for some reason I found the Shawn/Anthony combo completely likeable. I actually think I might read the story all the way straight through now, which I rarely ever do, with exception of a couple of my favorite authors. I don't know if your next story is my usual cup of tea, but I'll give it a taste. See ya then, Dude.