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for Black Star Cross

by GreatMasterM

schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
don't leave us hangin forever
person Koira
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read this chapter twice now and couldn't find the reference to BBM, which is pathetic since that movie has about as much dialogue as Wall-E, so any lines should be easy to find in here. Please tell us next chapter, yes? =)
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY for an update, and YAY for saving the pot roast!!!! i still want some... :( *sniff*

you already know my suggestions for anthony's last name so i'll just leave them off here.

you know what? i feel extremely tired right now... ugh...

sorry this review is pathetic...i'm loosing my touch.

ASOTA
person Kuromei
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*fans herself* You, my friend, have given me the vapors. That's not very easy to do. X3

But, yay! Now I can say everything I learned about male anatomy I learned from slash fiction. X3 Some might consider it TMI, but that's what makes it more "real," I think. =3 And I'm glad Shawn and Anthony are getting somewhere. X3 Slowly but surely. =P
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. i was happy with the hj...and i like the way the story is progressing. it reads like we are reading a story about well human being...experiencing life and relationships in real time. as for last names for anthony...how about...Anthony- James, Barnes, Griffin, Clark...I could go on, but those are my fav so far. I hope it helps...can't wait for you next update.
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I saw that coming. I had a feeling they wouldn't be going all the way quite yet. Though, at least they managed to not get cut off by the oven, as I had feared. That would have been absolutely horrible, for all parties involved. Except perhaps the author. I wonder what, exactly, Emmy was thinking about when she was looking at them. And I think I rather like the picture of them lying on the couch like that. It's sweet.
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heeheeheeheeheeheeheeheehee!!!! *evil cackle* oh the things he's going to do to him!! *evil cackle*

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! i can't wait for the nasty!!! jk!! but, yeah...STILL WAITING!! =D

ASOTA
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love pot roast though!! SAVE THE POT ROAST!! I WANT SOME!!!
ASOTA *stomach rumbles*
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the pot roast is gonna burn~~~
no way they can have foreplay and sex whithin 20 minutes hah! no way!
that pot roast is sooo gonna burn, and they'll have fun explaining to emma why~
hehehhehehehehe~

I'm so gonna enjoy the next chapter! XD
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh an i just wanted to say the way u ended that chap was really mean. :( just leaving us hanging like that.