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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Riiiiight... Like all three of them can have a civil conversation at school without at least raising their voices. *rolls eyes and smirks*
Anyway, good chapter. =3 Boo for Shawn's mom interrupting a good dream. XP I have no clue whether or not Keith's explanation of the mindset of popular people is accurate, but one would imagine that it could be the case. Some of us just like being in the background, while others love the spotlight. How could celebrites exist without those kinds of people? =3
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^w^
Anyway, good chapter. =3 Boo for Shawn's mom interrupting a good dream. XP I have no clue whether or not Keith's explanation of the mindset of popular people is accurate, but one would imagine that it could be the case. Some of us just like being in the background, while others love the spotlight. How could celebrites exist without those kinds of people? =3
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^w^
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really nice chat, those 3, no violence...we shall see...as far as the "populars" you got a lot of it right, many feel that way and once they escape to college start showing there true selves. high school is like a foodchain, eat or be eaten and college, to some, is like a breathe of fresh air.
it's sad to say but in order for anthony to get back his reputation he probably would have to go "ape-shit" on somebody like shawn to be initiated back into the group. sad but true.
anywho great chapter and i can't wait for the next one!
it's sad to say but in order for anthony to get back his reputation he probably would have to go "ape-shit" on somebody like shawn to be initiated back into the group. sad but true.
anywho great chapter and i can't wait for the next one!
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your comment about Jews in chapter 13 is extremely offensive. Please either change or remove that line.
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
who is Pamela Stitt??? this is soo not related is it? pamela? huh?
what happened todaaaaaaaaayy!? they went to the museum and shawn's becoming like anthony?
waaaarhhhtttttt isssssh gooinnn ooorrrnnn?
bwlablabrejwfnejkajhxbgrSPAMnawqkhbjekamjkeSPAMnkwejbuhjabSPAMwaikbghejskmlwei
me ish feeeling berry giberrisjjjjyyy~~~
UPDATE ALREADY this chapter only confused me more!
what happened todaaaaaaaaayy!? they went to the museum and shawn's becoming like anthony?
waaaarhhhtttttt isssssh gooinnn ooorrrnnn?
bwlablabrejwfnejkajhxbgrSPAMnawqkhbjekamjkeSPAMnkwejbuhjabSPAMwaikbghejskmlwei
me ish feeeling berry giberrisjjjjyyy~~~
UPDATE ALREADY this chapter only confused me more!
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool! An early chapter! XD I got to read it just before work. =3
Now, on to the actual review. We finally get to see why Shawn hates museums. And how he reacts to seeing guys that are together, and yet not. I hate it when I get that nagging qeustion in my head (not exactly what Shawn experiened, but close), the one that won't leave me alone no matter how deeply I immerse myself in video games and TV. I can totally relate to Shawn being driven insane by the mystery of the gay-or-not-gay dudes. X3
Well, well. What have we here? Anthony desperately trying to contact Shawn? What could he want...? Seriously, I have no clue. X3 Guess I'll just wait patiently for 15 days to find out. =3
Btw, HAPPY B-DAY! XD *sprinkles confetti on your head and gives you a beer* Kind of late (by the time you get this review), but it's the thought that counts, right? =3
Now, on to the actual review. We finally get to see why Shawn hates museums. And how he reacts to seeing guys that are together, and yet not. I hate it when I get that nagging qeustion in my head (not exactly what Shawn experiened, but close), the one that won't leave me alone no matter how deeply I immerse myself in video games and TV. I can totally relate to Shawn being driven insane by the mystery of the gay-or-not-gay dudes. X3
Well, well. What have we here? Anthony desperately trying to contact Shawn? What could he want...? Seriously, I have no clue. X3 Guess I'll just wait patiently for 15 days to find out. =3
Btw, HAPPY B-DAY! XD *sprinkles confetti on your head and gives you a beer* Kind of late (by the time you get this review), but it's the thought that counts, right? =3
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No, you are not the only one who thinks it was Steen. Just wanting to point that out. The thing about that story is that really few characters are ever even introduced, so that there aren't many possibilities for the identity of the stalker. And now that we can eliminate Nathan, even fewer. Like, exactly two =p
And about THIS story, I can absolutely relate to the whole being interested in random strangers thing. I have that, too.
And about THIS story, I can absolutely relate to the whole being interested in random strangers thing. I have that, too.
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that was certainly unexpected. And it's your birthday? Well then happy birthday! The chapter was certainly interesting, and I'm wondering about Shawn's apparent obsession with the Ambiguously Gay Duo. Shawn's and Anthony's interactions continue to amuse me, though. To no end. I'm curious as to what has Anthony all in a twitter, and I cannot wait for the next chapter.
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday and thanks for the early update. Good chapter, your writing is getting better and better all the time. I can't wait to see the connections between this chapter and the next.
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Here is your promised review. I hasn't much to say besides this: HAHAHA POT ROAST DAMMIT.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nekoi rin here~ (Changed my username) XD
last name for anthony... let's see....
somehow, i imagine something with a 'z' in it~
like Martinez or Rodriguez but something like 'Walker' also seems fine~
....
and hmmm....
*sighs* sorry~~~ I'm suddenly in no mood to do anything much...
oh don't worry, there's nothing wrong with your story... just more like something that happened here in real ilfe after i had finnished reading your chapter update.
shit happenes in life sometimes~ heee...
hope i'll be able to give ya a better review next time
gomen-ne~
chao~
last name for anthony... let's see....
somehow, i imagine something with a 'z' in it~
like Martinez or Rodriguez but something like 'Walker' also seems fine~
....
and hmmm....
*sighs* sorry~~~ I'm suddenly in no mood to do anything much...
oh don't worry, there's nothing wrong with your story... just more like something that happened here in real ilfe after i had finnished reading your chapter update.
shit happenes in life sometimes~ heee...
hope i'll be able to give ya a better review next time
gomen-ne~
chao~