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for Black Star Cross

by GreatMasterM

schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!!! Holy crap that was a real cliffie! can't wait to see what happens.
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WTF? The ending was a great cliffhanger, btw. That was like amazing.
The best part this chapter was when Shawn was listening in on his mother's conversation with his grandmother, and talked a bit about his withdrawal. Definitely put his mother in a better perspective, also helped to explain more of Shawn's craziness. That, and the whole scene with the t-shirt, that was super cute.
person Koira
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the cliffie, but I'm sure it's only a joke.
Right?
.....right?
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keith, come one now...I don't know if he's joking or serious...although a part of me thinks he is serious about possibly being gay but being in love...something tells me it might be Anthony that he is in love with, not Shawn...who knows I could be all wrong but one thing I am absolutely right about is how awesome this story is and how I can't wait for more...great work!
person steph8503
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i swear if you take forever to update i will hunt you down and......... beg you to update as soon as pssible. ha you thought i was going to say something mean. nope not this time but if you end a chap like that again i might have too. lol
person kls
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! More!
person ReighChama
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
UUH....can I please say NO, umm.. and I have full confidence that shawn will punch kieth in the face then apologize when keith says it was a test on anthony's part?

jkzing
but still. Wow, I just wow. I still say Shawn punches him in the face and directly tells Anthony... which won't happen... but we shall se
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Umm. . . Uh. . . Yeah. Umm. I don't know exactly what to say here, though to say I hadn't been expecting something like this (though not this extreme/blunt) would be a lie. And I am no lier. But. Yeah.

Hooray?

Or should I be upset?

Oh well. Can't wait to see what happens.
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*pops by a review*

onto the next chapter!
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
popping another review...

onto the next chapter!

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