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Oh no, not one more chapter...ok I guess I'll learn to wait patiently...ahh who am I kidding, I'll be waiting anxiously until you come back...as far as Blue Rose- it was mentioned in Tennessee Williams' play, The Glass Menagerie. (When Jim, the gentleman caller, and Laura are having their "date" and they were remembering back when they were both in school...she has pleurosis and he thought she was saying blue roses, so from that point he called her Blue Roses.) (oh and blue roses exist, they are just man-made) Just a little side note...well anywho great chapter...can't wait to find out what going on with anthony and why he is acting weird and stuff.

Dude, I just got done reading chapter 1 and wow....

Lol, the ending of chapter 3 was pretty tight man.
I can't wait to read the next chapter

Seriously... This story made me so emotional... That
I started crying man... I love this story!!

Okay, so Keith's "I wanna fuck you" line was a false alarm, and I'm surprised the man's still walking. He could've gotten his ass kicked twice over. I wonder why that thought makes me want to giggle... X3

Anyway, it seems like Anthony had made some progress, only to take two steps back in this last chapter. Nice way to end it, though. Makes me want to kidnap you and leave you in a locked room to work on your story. Not that I would, of course. X3

Looking forward to the next chapter, Sage! =3

Keith must die...
honestly, he's gonna induce a heart attack on either one of those two boys. tsk. they can't die yet. XD

and goodness! goodness! this anthony is a neurological endocrinological MESS!
He can't even think straight, and he should know that, which is all the more reason for him to be, well 'not straight' and loving shawn more... coz he's not straight. but wait, he's a mess rigght?
lol~ xD

then you gotta give shawn a medal, his patience is golden man, he SHOULD have decked keith for that joke. IT WAS NOT FUNNY!
especially when we readers had to wait for god knows how long to find out what the heck keith meant by saying that.
jeezz.. a joke... omg it was a joke... IT WAS NOT FUNNY KEITH!!! *throws the joke back at his not-so-stupid jock head*
gah!

heh~ aaah well...
but hey! look on the bright side, these two have been more freely dishing out sexualy-hinting conversation between themselves. what if someone overhears? = O ouhlalala~
that'd be interesting 6.6 heh~

awright,
i wish thee speed!


- nekoii

Ohmygoodness, what a way to end a chapter!! Keith? Gay, loves Shawn and wants -Shawn- to fuck -him-? I read what you had said to Nekoii-desu about there being no seme. But I totally see Shawn as more of a bottom, and find it odd to think of him fucking Keith. If anything, I think it'd be the other way, but things aren't always as they seem eh? Either way, I was like, omg, did Keith just say what I think he said? Eeeeek, can't wait for an update to find out what is going to happen!

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"Thirdly, Nekoii-desu, actual sex would make Anthony's head explode...and not in a good way. Also, THERE IS NO SEME, DANGIT! I specifically made BSC to combat gay and slash story stereotypes, such as the seme/uke dynamics. That is why there's a constant power struggle between Shawn and Anthony."

*reels back eyes widened in fear* uhm. okay. sorry. SORRY!!! >___< it was an innocent question reaaaallyyy!!!!

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okay Keith you can stop joking now...

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Keith, you can, stop joking now......

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Keith?

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that was a joke right?

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right?!

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OMFG!PLEASE TELL ME ITS A JOKE!!!!

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!11!!!!!!

First off, DUDE! D= I've been working! You try running on copious amounts of caffine and sugar for three weeks and see if you can still feel your brain. X3

Now, I'm all caught up and I have to say it's nice to see Shawn and Anthony making even more progress. A little lapse from Anthony with the "OMG I just blew a guy!" was to be expected. X3 And it's nice to see Shawn's Mom's side of her story. It's cool you're not the kind of author that'll just ignore one side in favor of the other, even from the first-person perspective. =3

That said, wtf is up with Keith? O____o;; Is he trying to get himself gelded? Or is it some kind of test? Like a, "If you'll take any offer of sex you're not good enough for my friend" kind of thing?

....... That'd be kind of sweet, if Keith had a reason to worry. Either way, I think he's going to get his ass kicked. I guess we'll just have to wait and see, won't we? X3

Omg! That is a mean cliff hanger there xD. never thought Keith was gay. Can't wait for the next chapter :)