rate_review Reviews

love the alley scene and the movie theater scene.

Nice chappie but one question? STD's can be spread by 'swallowing greedily' someone's seed ya know. So why did he even bother with the condom when Jamie had already swallowed his essence? Unless Jamie wasn't worried aobut Travis and travis was worried that Jamie might have it. Sorry most of it was cute. But I've been reading other stories too and it makes no sense at all why they'd be swallowing manseed of each other but being careful enough to put on a dang condom. No sense at all.

Aside from that great chapter, I'm finding this story to be a great read. I did love how Possesive Jamie was acting when Brendan went all crazy. I'm hoping that they'll be together for awhile, they seem to make a cute couple and even if they don't I hope they can remain friends. I already know that this story is complete I stil like to review when i figure that a chappie's really good. I would've reviewed your other chapters after the first one, I was just so enthralled and now I'm tired so I think I'm going to bed. Anyway I hope to read more of your stories.

Nice story so far. I've only read the first chapter though. i'm glad he's wearing glasses most characters in stories don't. heh heh. I'm glad Travis was there to save Jamie.

They're such cute boys and they make a really sweet couple, I think all stories should end with steamy smut and heartfelt confessions of love ^.^ Also I adored their friends and everything they did to get them together simply because they love them and want them to be happy, we should all be so lucky to have friends like that. On a slightly random note, I realize that this is Jaime's story not his dad's but I kind of wish that we could have gotten a little about how he was doing, although with Baron dead his life can only get better I would think. I'll just pretend he found a really gorgeous, smart guy who wanted him for a partner and an equal not a plaything, at least I think Andrew deserves a happy ending like that :)
One of the things I noticed in reading the story all at once was getting to see how it just got better and better, if I didn't actually have to stop for real life stuff I probably would have read it all in one sitting.^^ The chemistry and attraction between the boys and that tension that surrounded them was wonderful, I loved the build up to them getting together it just worked so well considering everything that went on. Fabulous story I loved reading it! ^_^ (yes i realize a ramble on but as long as it makes sense it's all good ;)

^^ loved it. hehe <3

My feelings toward this story were somewhat up and down throughout, especially in the early middlish. But, I'm lovin it by the end, so yay to you. I really appreciated the epilogue. I don't normally like epilogues or wrap up chapters, because they are usually pretty lame and anticlimatic. Its like you just hear about what every character in the story is during at some point in the future, and everyone's just happy. But, there was like an additional drama, with the whole 'I love you' bit, plus you covered the wrap up stuff, without making it just a wrap up. I don't know that I loved the whole Baron bit. I think its because I work in psychology and I find Jamie's recovery from the whole abuse bit to be a bit too easy. But, I know its a fic and not like you have time to put someone through the therapeutic process. Just an overall good fic.

Just read this for the second time. *grins* Loved it even more the second time around. Now I've got ideas bursting for that fic (late, late, late I know) that I promised you. I think it's adorable that Travis is just this sweet, teddy bear and Jamie is the kick-ass one that defends him. That just makes me squee in all kinds of ways. I'm looking forward to making them dance in my twisted clutches, mwa ha ha.

Wow!! You started this in '07 and actually followed through with it to the end, that is so awesome, inspiring too. I love love love this fic. I came across it last night, in it's recently finished state, and stayed up 'til 2am to read it all in one swoop. You deserve way more than 50+ reviews, but I know not everyone always reviews. 6k+ hits is pretty good. I totally added this to my list of completed fics that I -loved- ! Cause I love to re-read fics that I really really enjoyed. Anyways, rambling; I love your work, I hope for more soon!!

I should have probably blabbed some about my likes and all too, hmm? >w< I just adore Jamie's character, I hate Baron and wish Jamie had had a better life, but it's awesome that he meets a sweetheart like Travis! Both of the main characters' friends make me laugh, their involvment in trying to get the two together, and the funny things they do or say and just how they are cool friends and all. I'm glad you killed off Baron, and Jamie's dad sounds yummy. So yeah, I totally love your OCs & storyline/plotness/ideas & sexy hot slash sex :'D

Wow, I really really loved this. I love Jamie... I'm basically speechless but this is a fantastic story and reading it has given me so much pleasure!