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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man! I wonder how his plan will worked out??
Will he really kill Granger?? I wonder if Brian will ever find happiness? And with how??
Damn! I can't wait to know! plz update soon! *hugs*
Will he really kill Granger?? I wonder if Brian will ever find happiness? And with how??
Damn! I can't wait to know! plz update soon! *hugs*
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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great writing. A lot of pathos and character in this story. Do continue, so we can learn what happens to Brian...
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to add another chapter to this dammable good story? and when the hell are you going to finish it? I REALLY LIKE IT!!!
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow,
That was fucking awesome! You sure got the gritty, sweaty horror of prison life down right! Poor Brian, the nightmarish experiences in the penal system have transformed him from youthful petty thief to a vengeful monster.
The wife I can understand...but to actually want to rape a sweet innocent six-year-old? Oh Go, I hope he doesn't go through with that!
Hurry up with the next chapter! I'm on the edge of my seat!
That was fucking awesome! You sure got the gritty, sweaty horror of prison life down right! Poor Brian, the nightmarish experiences in the penal system have transformed him from youthful petty thief to a vengeful monster.
The wife I can understand...but to actually want to rape a sweet innocent six-year-old? Oh Go, I hope he doesn't go through with that!
Hurry up with the next chapter! I'm on the edge of my seat!
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well done!
You portrayed the horrors of prison rape realistically and offered insight into the characters. All in the first chapter. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Although I feel sorry for the little six-year-old girl, Brian's emotions are understandable; he wants to hurt Granger as much as possible. I especially like Smith's character; in prison, he is a paternal figure to Brian as well as a comfort to replace the loss of Nana. I hope we'll see more of him in the future.
I'll be keeping an eye on this. :)
You portrayed the horrors of prison rape realistically and offered insight into the characters. All in the first chapter. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Although I feel sorry for the little six-year-old girl, Brian's emotions are understandable; he wants to hurt Granger as much as possible. I especially like Smith's character; in prison, he is a paternal figure to Brian as well as a comfort to replace the loss of Nana. I hope we'll see more of him in the future.
I'll be keeping an eye on this. :)
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really love this! It's fascinating to see the transformation that Brian has undergone and how far he's willing to go to exact revenge. This is a very compelling storyline- I can't wait to read more.