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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for reviewing A Lost Life! and I'm loving this one!
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you're still around! This story is one of my favorites.
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The long-awaited update....likie.
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, what a good story! I read part earlier and just finished ch 5, and I sure hope Brian lets go of his anger so he doesn't end up back in jail. He would be the likely suspect if Granger is attacked, wouldn't he? And he would become exactly what he was put in prison for, in essense, that detective would win, even as he lost, too. Jessica seems like she could be his salvation, or they could be each others? ^-^ I like her character alot.
Great writing, great angst. The prison scenes and dialog were very real-feel. So, what happens next????
Thanks.
Great writing, great angst. The prison scenes and dialog were very real-feel. So, what happens next????
Thanks.
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah for me finding this again, it took me a while but I did. And happy to see there are two more chapters from when I last read and reviewed. I'm glad Brian won't do any direct damage to the girl, but I'm kinda interested in Granger's wife... if she's such a trophy wife, maybe she doesn't really care whether Brian fucks her or not, maybe she'll even want it. That might backfire a little. Brian might have to go with his rape-little-girl plan (I hope not). But for now, let's watch Brian stuff his face and buy some whores, shall we? Post soon please.
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! this is an amazingly written dark fic! i like and pity Brian, but i don't support his idea of revenge. oh well, i'm very curious to know what will happend next...
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic! I've never read anything in this genre before, so this is a tad new to me, but I love what I'm reading. I can't wait to read more of it.
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! a dark fic but with a real good plot. I'm very curious to know how the story goes on... please write more.
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you don't mind an anonymous review of your story. I prefer to stay that way. I like your story, and want to know if you will add more chapters to it. If you do, I would love to read them. Thanks.
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, the plot thickens! i'm really amped to see where this is going and what will happen when brian is on the outside!