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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Carlos is such an ass! I felt so bad for Rose. I kinda hated Lily for starting all this, but I can sympathize with her fear of punishment and all this compassion-is-weakness feeling. It felt like Carmen has successfully set for herself a sort of a prison/concentration camp full of these poor, scared creatures. Can't wait for more Vitale!! :)
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August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love your story! It is so well written. I, too, feel very sad about the poor girl... trapped into memories of an abusive relationship that scarred her for life, yet craving for the touch and love of the same man that caused all that. I only have one question, a bit silly probably... is John and Johnny the same person she refers to in the flashbacks she has?
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so far i have to say that this is definitely one of the best fanfics that i have come acrossed here. hope you update soon!
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so far it's one of the best fanfics that i have acrossed. hope you update soon!
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I simply LOVE this story! I feel sorry for Lisa (as I know a little of what she went through when she was younger) but despite that, I find this story very erotic. I hope that things will turn out for her but on the other hand, I want to see bad things happen as well. Yes, I know I'm twisted and weird but I can't help it as you write so well!
Linda
Linda
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update.
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! An update!! I love this fic. I don't know where you're going with it but I'll keep reading because you've got me hooked. Update again soon!!
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story! I, too, have no idea where you'll go with it, but so far I have to say that I am enjoying it! It's erotic and raw and sensual and makes me connect with the characters... well, sympathize with the female character, whose name now that I think about it, we don't know yet! And is John connected with Vitale somehow? I have so many questions! Write more... it will do you AND me a lot of good! :)
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And i am waiting! can't too much longer!
I very much am enjoying this one. please hurry with more!
I very much am enjoying this one. please hurry with more!
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it!! it was awsome. Please continue this cool fanfic!!!