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ch5. Wow! That was awesome. And also an evil cliff-hanger!. Meanie. I just love, love, love Bey and Silva's banter. I also enjoyed getting to see inside Bey's head in this chapter. I wonder if Silva's family is as evil as he says they are. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please keep up the good work. I always love seeing updates of your stories!

Poor Silva will give himself a heart attack worrying like that, he should just give up already Bey's too stubborn to listen to him. I just hope he won't regret it. lol
Is Silva's father really that bad? I'm really curious about Silva's past now.
Please update soon! =)

ps: you're stories are so great! you're definitely one of my favorite writters at the moment! I just love you're Ynuyasha fanfic Uke. =3

I read the first chapter a long while ago... and loved it!
now ive read up to chapter 4! and still love it!
I really hope you are going to continue writing this!

Oh no! what will happen to silva if his father gets a hold of him? i don't think i want to know... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! this is very interesting, but alas, by default, your stories are always interesting.
ASOTA

Great story with lots of good ideas. They make a very cute couple. The bride Bey is Mr. Macho man. I can see him butting heads with Silva's father when he finally shows up. It should be hilarious.

Like all of your stories, this story is original and well written. I'm waiting for an update!

xx

this is fun... love the conflicting personalities. Bey is just fantastically raunchy! Wonderful.
I hope there's more. Oh how I HOPE there's more, 'cuz the tension that's building up towards more conflict has got me REALLY intruiged as to what's gonna happen? Bey's playin' it all down, 'cuz he doesn't have a clue, and Silva's OBVIOUSLY very worried, but hasn't revealed WHY all his clan's wrath would be taken out ON Bey (aside from an arranged marriage that didn't happen 'cuz Silva ran off) but why did he??? elemental customs, reasons behind decisions, and why exactly Bey is in so much danger???? aaaaaaaaaaaaaall (and more some) need to be explained!! **out of breath**
LOVE IT!!
keep writing please!
add more soon!!!!!!!!!!! <3

more more more
pleaaaaaaaaaaaaase please please please **big round dopey puppy eyes** ^@_____@^

*whimper*

There, you made me whimper. I just wanted you to know that I love this story and hope you update soon.

love, Wheez

It seems to me that Bey is going to end up breaking Silva's little elemental heart without even realizing it... I feel so sorry for him... I'm worried about the rest of Silva's tribe too... they sound like very bad news. You haven't updated in a while, but I hope you do it soon!

Silva and Bey are soooo cute. I'm a romantic at heart, so I love Silva's ideas about fedility and loyalty in marriage. I'm hoping that Bey acquires these ethics. Because if he doesn't, I have a feeling he will break Silva's heart.
Also, it would be pretty awesome to have a Silva as top scene since the reader wasn't able to witness that action.
Please update soon!