rate_review Reviews

I'm happy you're feeling better. I see the down time took away none of your sharpness. I adore how you write Silva and Bey. Bey is such a softy for Silva,not that he'd ever admit to that sentiment^_^. You did a terrific build-up in this chapter. All that angst,tension over what was going to happen to them before and after they arrived at their destination. Also, you lost none of your sense of timing. It was positively evil to leaving us at a cliff literally and figuratively. Though that's what a good writer does;leave the reader wanting more. Greatly looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh my god and I thought Sylva's brother was bad whew his Uncle is like a self-rightous,arrogant, contentious ass hole of the ultimate type. ewwww. Boy makes me wonder where you'll go with this one and I'll wait to see.

So happy you have returned and with such a suspenseful and angsty chapter...
Also, I just feel I must point out, the way you portray your characters is truly divine, I feel as though
I really know Bey and Silvia... it's just delicious! Thank you.
XoXo

O__________O I am so glad you're feeling better. I just hope you're health holds out long enough to write another chapter. X3 This cliffhanger is even worse (or better, depending on your POV) than the last one! *wrings hands*

Btw, cousin marriage is so EW! And what do they want with Vasha? Silva's "protection" is one thing, but what do they want with him?

It is good to see that you are back to updating. I cannot wait for the next chapter; this one was really exciting. I hope to read the next chapter soon.

I did not expect to enjoy this story as much as I did. I just started reading it on a whim because I was bored out of my skull. It is so well written and exciting. I like the relationship between the 2 heroes. They go well together and it does not seem to have the overused them of slave/master relationship. You have no idea how sick-and-tired I was of that constant use of dominance and cruelty in relationships. It is a theme that is highly overused in AFF. This story has a more original take on the relationship theme. It is very much appreciated. Please update soon.

Thanks,
Oni

ok, wow. It's been almost a year since I stopped reading this story because there seemed to be no more updates forthcoming...
This morning I looked it up for some reason, and lo and behold, there was an update, not only an update but three chapters.
I was almost late for work because of it.

And what an update. The writing is unbelievable, it's so good that I almost want to burn my own stuff....
Bey and Silva are just as awesome as they were in the beginning, Vasha should be roasted on a stick, he's just that much of a dick, and all the other characters are great.
The fight scene was immaculate, perfect, and so thrilling.

You have an amazing talent for writing, and I can't hardly wait to read more of Bey and Silva's (mis)advantures.
Keep up the good work.

I'm so hooked on this story I hope you update it very soon!

oh no! this is worse than before! update soon please!
ASOTA

I think you posted this chapter to the wrong story. :)