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Hey! That's one really fantastis story. Including funny parts. :P I hope you continue soon, because I can't wait to see/read what happens next.

Most interesting! I like the characters and am looking forward to seeing Bey's (is that the right one? :oP) reaction. Will definitely be waiting in anticipation for more!

Interesting. Of course, impossible to accept as a one-shot. You'll have to develop the whole world, explaining the cultural clan differences that would make tatooing a recognizable sign of marriage for one group but not another. And then we've got one character who is obviously a personage gone awry while his love interest/buddy is this world's version of the happy player, caught up in a situation that will no doubt bring out the best in him - and the worst! - as he struggles to help his friend/lover out without binding himself inextricably...oops. Probably too late, isn't it?
Oh yeah, this will be a fun read.
But wait! Max is still left on big cat-guy's lap angsting about having entered a gay inter-species marriage without his consent, and Sango is weeping and pissed and Miroku is still trying to reconcile his selfish human wishes with his hanyou imperatives and coming up, if not a bit short certainly somewhat confused... Damn it woman! How long do you intend to keep us on hold here?!
Grumbling in annoyance at the combination of muse and obligation that seems to make it impossible for you to finish anything any more, after having made such a glorious start. Heavy sigh. Still, it does make me wonder if there is some sufficient poke or prodding that will get you back on your existing stories... (yeah, yeah, I noticed an update on "Kazaana" and it was good and made me sorta happy, so I should shutup, but I'll admit my own favorites still lie languishing in neglect!)

Ha ha haaaa! Married?!? XD I am SO looking forward to more chapters. X3

Wow! this really cool! Love the tattoo by the way... and who Is the one on 'top'? Shorak seams more of a submissive one but i can;t guess right.. LOL update soon?

hmm i really like what uve done with this story
please update soon!
love and cookies!

omg! they're married! and yay for the beard being shaved. lol! wonderful writing, i am looking forward to future updates!

That's a piece of good reading! Thanks for it, it reads well, it's entertaining, and it makes me look forward to the next chapter. Which I hope will come out soon? Ok, now more details; the two characters - brilliant. Can't wait for Bey to find out what they both stepped into! And the fact that Bey is the 'wife' there ... I wonder if it plays any role ... Ok, see you next time, and once again, thanks!

Sweetie, I love it! If it's old, does that mean it's finished and you will be updating soon? Please, pretty please?!?

So, this is where you've been! I was wondering if you hadn't taken a walk off a short cliff or something.

Highly entertaining, I'm curious as to how the relationship between these two will pan out, as they're already such close friends(Nakama!). Bey is such a man...it made me laugh.

Let's see you keep this juggling act going, it should be good.
Nacht