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For this chapter I would like to thank my inspiration, and muse, FHR, for without her this chapter would not have happened. Thanks babe! You're the best.

It's looking good. But write more! And give more sex because I'm reviewing!

Hay, this here's Hammer's friend. I have a big suggestion. Please, please make paragraphs. First of all, I'd love to read it, but it's rather meticulous without paragraphs. I'm pretty sure I used that word way-ass wrong too. but really, I get 5 sentences in and it just gets long and drawn out. I'm pretty sure more people would read the story if you took the time to add paragraphs, thus getting more and better ratings, and more reviews. Thank you. :D

I'll come back and read and give a proper review if you add in those paragraphs.

this is HOT! love it!