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for Conceptions

by Arcueido

person corvis
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome! it is absolutly worth developing; the idea of a (very hot) imaginary friend coming real? is very interesting. i feel like i am dangling off the cliff of 'what happens now!?!?!' :) by all means, continue, if you are able!
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:)
person Kerrisa
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Goodness i am slow. After pondering what happened in this chapter it just dawned on me how/why you came up with Conceptions as the title. Watashi wa baka desu ~.~ Now to get down to business! >=O!! Lol, actually, i was out of the loop for a bit before i realized Takeshi was a figment of her imagination ( i was so proud of myself for figuring it out before you told us, yay me! lol ) and it got me to thinking that i'd like to have a hot imaginary friend too! And then the accident happened. I had a similar accident before ( the driver ahead tried to pull an illegal u-turn without bothering to check his mirrors... the car i was driving was totalled ~_~) and thought that maybe having an imaginary friend might not be that good an idea anymore. But then that lead me back to thinkong on what caused the accident.. she felt his touch.. And here is where i'm utterly intrigued! Did she feel him because work is literally driving her insane and her mental health is deteriorating? Or is it something different all together? I don't want it to be a oneshot! I may be being selfish.. but that felt like a teaser =O! And there are so many routes you can take from where you've left off and i'd like to see what you got planned =D i enjoyed what you wrote, and if you do decide to contiue it i'm not sure i'll be able love you more then i already do.. but i could try!!! =D Arigatou Hyper-chan for making my day that much more entertaining!