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by Elektra69

schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, sora269, even though those kinds of virtual videos or games creep me out, I still think 'wow' to you doing that, good job, too! I also think the beginning of your story is just as possibly creepy, and mysterious and it is well written, so I will be watching for more chapters to see where you take this! (blonde=she blond=he)

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