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for The Pond

by Elektra69

person Tray Tray
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG NO~~~~ T.T you must update soon! Chapter six was great...oh the cliffys! Great work ^^
person dutsada
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the clip you made.. its great... Stupid Jared.. but then again its always difficult to accept the fact that your supposed loved ones are betraying you.. poor Lukas~~~ *sniff*
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Maor or i will shot joo.
person Firewalker
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That Gabriella girl is quite a bitch. Nice story, keep up the good work ;).
person dutsada
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow~~~ that B!#%h faked a pregnancy and cheated Jared! Lukas go spill it to Jared!!!! a lot was explained here.. I did'nt expect Lukas to have fallen in love with Luc before.. i was surpised.. oh well update when you could.. and have an enjoyable and safe trip~! Have fun
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You;ve totally hooked me...I want to strangle Gabriella...I hate her!
I love your story though! Please write more soon!
person Zombies456
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is amazing! I love it! I am so excited for the next chapter

I cannot believe hes marrying her. Uhghhhh. Yhis is so upsetting.

But Im sure something good will happen later. Okay

:DDDD
person Mahie
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! Lukas' life keeps getting worse. :( Poor thing. I'm intrigued with Justin. Why did he want to kill Lukas at the hospital? Damn him. They loved one another!! Well, I guess we'll have to wait and see what happens. LOL.
Great work!!
person dutsada
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
boy do i want to smack Jared in the head and kick him right where it counts! He is simply amazing at doing unexpected stuff like pissing his girlfriend of badly, kissed Lukas right after that, made up with his blasted girlfriend while Lukas was asleep having NIGHTMARES at that and then the next minute pronounce himself and Gabriela married!!! Poor Lukas.. he is so gonna break.. but great chapt! It revealed a lot.. i don't like his father
person Stacy
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm guilty of not reviewing. i'm sorry!
your story is awesome and i loved your preview on myspace or whatever it was on!
i just have one question....when are you going to let them have sex!!
i just can't wait!!
please update soon!