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A captain getting a little flustered over a pretty man, how cute! Tee hee!

Thanks for writing this!

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY.

:D

^.^

♥
Camui~

[[haha, like I NEED to use actual words in a review. xP]]

I absolutely adore your writing style. The characters are very cute and likeable, I must say. I only have one question, and it may be one that's all ready aswered and I missed it, but how old is Ri...Ra....Rikaisa! That's it. Sorry, it was hard to remember x.o;;;

Either way, very well done and I can't wait for later chapters, so update soon!

Great story I can't wait to read more. G

My sentiments: ... Heheheheheh. *evil snicker, finger twiddling* Ooohoho, those twins sure put our lovely main character in a predicament.
Muwhaha.

Love! Keep it going. :]

Cute,I want to see more:)

"He liked and respected his commanding officer, but the guy really needed to get laid."

LMAO. I'm sure you'll take care of that, no? :)

"In fact Xander often wondered if his senior officer had ever actually had----"

The captain, a virgin? Noooo...

Anyway, I've never seehn Invader Zim, but your story promises to be great. I like your style, how you introduce that characters without haste and with just as many details as are needed at the time. Please keep updating!

~jea