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for In a dark place

by scatbunny

person Explitive
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was evil...and HOTT XD Keep up the good work!
person Explitive
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Update soon!
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, though it would have been cool to have added more instances to suggest it was a dream. Otherwise very good. Great original effort!
person Valiant
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There were a few typos in this story but I must ask...did you type this while going to the bathroom?