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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yaaaay Alok^^ I loved the chapter. hell, i love this story. it's entertaining^^ and, it's easy to read. wonderful work, and update soon!!
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THE idea is very interesting and it could develop in a very intense story , please go on :)
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a wonderful chapter, but i've said this from the beginning^^ go on, go on
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I knew 'Koli' was the brother from the start -I really did. But when you said Seb had chocolate brown hair "as always" I went into TOTAL unnecessary panic, hah!
This is really good. The idea is so wrong and Seb is so innocent-like when his alter-ego is so NOT. Stealing your sister's fiance, what athing to do.
At least it provides us with a good story, right?
This is really good. The idea is so wrong and Seb is so innocent-like when his alter-ego is so NOT. Stealing your sister's fiance, what athing to do.
At least it provides us with a good story, right?
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hawtness. seb is cool. ^-^
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^^ I liked it. But your updating speed is a little disconcerting...
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
i cant wait to find out what'll happen, the premise is amazing and i love the characters.
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i cant wait to find out what'll happen, the premise is amazing and i love the characters.
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh very nice, very nice! Everyone enjoys a "rebel in love" XD
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heh, i like the story!
ca'nt wait to see what sort of reaction kaden will have
i hope you update soon :) not every year... please... :)
ca'nt wait to see what sort of reaction kaden will have
i hope you update soon :) not every year... please... :)
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, absoulutely love it! I like the idea of him being a teen, and still taller too. :P I really like the way you describe the way he reacts to the new sensations. Its always really sensual. And the part where he takes away the cig and koli just laughs is amusing. ^^ cant wait for the next chapter~!