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for Nature's Choice

by szaugg

person Anon
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I do love the way you manage to make extremely dubious con adorable. This latest chapter gave me the shivers though. I'm waiting for one of his gods to come to his rescue -- though without a source of fresh water or a wood around I'm a little worried as to how. Or maybe that arcane god might make an appearance. That would work for me, too.
person kati-chan
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O Horu better be coming!
person acr
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Update! Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Perona
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow amazing chapter, but what a cliffie! Gah hopefully Horu and/or Mosumato show up to save 'Maro's ass...well maybe not too soon. Haha maybe after Horu'll lock our little theif in a room somewhere to keep him out of the trouble he seems to stumble into with frightening regularity. Can't wait for an update, this story is brilliant!
person johnny
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so good that I need more!!! Please!
person kylee123
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. I hope you are feeling better. Nemaro is in a little bit of trouble. I hope nothing horrible happens to the girls. I read the whole story again. I was giggling the whole time. I hope Nemaru can get some help from Horu or Matsumoto before Lord Lanosh gets his hands on him. I dont want anything bad to happen to Nemaru and the girls.
person Kuromei
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_______O OMG Horu! HORU! Get your sexy green ass to the keep, 'Maro's in trouble!!! DX

Still, what is the purpose of being a "Gift," other than being a Historian's whore? XP Then again, maybe it was explained somewhere and I was too busy killing Lanosh in my head to pay attention. X3

As much as I want to say "update quicker!", I understand how health issues and real life in general have a way of, well, getting in the way. X3 So, I'll just wait for the next chapter eagerly. ^w^
person dutsada
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God *yanks hair* Where is Horu!!! Oh man Nemaro is in real trouble~~ great chapter... So happy to see it up again hehehe... thanks
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha I just started reading this today and it's so amusing! Very funny! I hope Nemaro gets his wits about him and can escape the Lord. Altho I have a feeling Horu will be really upset w/him!