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Love the latest chapter-- of all your stories, this is the hottest, and they're all atomic hot. I love these characters, and I love reading about Nemaro getting plowed... Please, please have Goru work the boi hard!

My guess is that Masumoto stayed at the castle to assist Horu and the women (who I love, I hope you'll do a story featuring them someday--amazon women with brawn and curves rock my world). I think that's why his magic attenuated as Nemaro travelled. When I began to suspect that, I feared that Nemaro could drown, because Masumoto couldn't know with surety that his power would last the journey. He definitely cut it close! If my suspicion is true, maybe in a re-draft you should have Nemaro recognize the danger--the suspense would be that much more intense.
As for the cavalry, I devoutly hope they're sufficiently delayed that Nemaro will have a wonderful time in spite of himself.

You really love throwing curve balls,don't you? Goru and Toru were not who anyone expected to see at the end of that tunnel. All I can say for Nemaro is 'GULP'. He must be sprayed with trouble and god attracting colonge because he's always running into one or the other^_^. We might have to save a pat on the head for Horu too,depending on how Goru wants him~_^.

What's wrong with Mosumato? If that was him that pulled Nemaro from playroom,why did his powers seem so weak and out of his control? I might just be reading more into it than necessary. Looking forward to the next chapter.

the chapter title reminds me of that show "Everybody loves raymond"

anyway omg horu, goru, and toru. I LOL'd. I wonder what their connection is to one another. I love the description of the bubble. and these two new gods are so funny. i can't wait to see how nemaro is going to handle it.

horu come to the rescue quick! can't wait to see how things will turn out...and what's goru's beef with horu anyway? XD

great chapter and i enjoyed reading it! sorry to hear about your computer. computer deaths are so distressing, even if it isn't really a living thing...

Poor Nemaro~! He sure does get a lot of God-lovin doesn't he? hahaha I love it!

O_______O Oh, holy fucking shit, no! What does Goru have against Horu? Oh shit, oh shit oh SHIT!

Out of the frying pan and into the fire, time and time again. XP Poor Nemaro, can't he catch a break? X__X;

Damn, all these cliffhangers... If I didn't love 'em so much, I don't know what I'd do. XD See you next time!

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I can’t tell you how glad I am to see this chappie up ^_^ Heard a rumour that you were back to writing and it’s the first bit of good news I’ve had in a looooong time. I know people say “it’s just fanfic,” but seriously, you give me hope for this year. Awesome to have you back ^_~ *keeps fingers crossed for an “Uke” update*

I have been waiting for this chapter forever! Finally! And I am glad to say it was definitely exciting and I can't wait for the next one (actually I can wait, but I don't want to). This is my favorite story out of the ones you have written; it's just so exciting!

Really great chapter ! Nemaro's inner dialogue is so good !
Can't wait for more...
And welcome back XD

Duuuuuuude~! O3O *glomps the update* If it's a choice between Lanosh and Mosumato, I'd pick Mosumato. Definitely. XD Now, if only the blue bastard would let Nemaro see his friends... XP

I was so looking forward to this, and the only disappointment I feel is that the chapter had to end. X3 I am really looking forward to the next. ^w^ See you then. =3