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chap 5.

oh goodness graciousness... what shit did he get himself into now... more so right after Horu blatantly voices out his possessiveness. Good god. help. the girls are gonna get into more trouble than Maro for sure. it was afterall their ingenious idea for that dress.

oh no! nemaro has the worst of luck.
ASOTA

OH NOES DD:
the plot thickens~

oh my gosh. I was going to try not to read this. WIPs murder me. But I couldn't HELP it. **shakes fist** and now I'm stuck on this one too, haha
i love you for this. I love all the things you take into account -- the careful structuring of the world, and everything from wizards to gods to a higher god to the evil historians and temples gifts and -- I just really like it. YEY :D
and uhm
it's 5 int he morning now cause i stayed up to read this, lol, so this is gonna be the end of the review cause i need sleep sooooo badly
YOU ARE AMAZING

Everyone sure does love Nemaro don't they please update soon.

Bahahahahahahaha! I wonder what Horu did to scruff Goru's fur the wrong way. And I assume that Toru was at the end of Horu's ruling judgment to want Goru to leave Nemaro alone. A definite must read on the next chapter. I wanna see the rest. Will Horu make it there before Goru feasts on Maro or will the feasting be over before Horu can rescue poor Maro?

Thanks for the update! I've been following you for a little while now and I'm glad you're able to post new chapters more regularly. You've probably heard this a thousand times, but poor Nemaro! Hahaha, he can't get a break, can he? I love how he's so mad that everyone thinks he's just a dumb little toy.

Well, I'm sure Nemaro will get some slack soon enough. I must say, I'm very interested in Goru and Horu. If memory serves, doesn't Horu also have very blue eyes? And Horu sounds an awful lot like Goru and Toru... Maybe they're not twins after all, but just two of three? =D Looking forward to the next chapter!

Toru, Horu and Goru wahahhaah creativeXD
Anyways, I like this story, the first chapters were hot seriously!
After that I was wondering how you would continue your story, you couldn't keep up the smut the whole time; that would be boring.
But I like this now! I like the plot! And hihi I like the characters!XD And it's really frustrating that the gods can smell
arousal! Poor little Maro can't even have that little privacyXD
Haha, anyways great story! I'm definitely gonna read more of yours! I hope you'll update soon!

Poor Nemaro! I am guessing that Toru and Goru are Horu's brothers. Hilarious. What happenned with Mosumato? It was as if the power protecting Nemaro was getting weaker and weaker until it gave out completely. How is Nemaro going to protect his ass? I am sure Horu would not be happy about his brothers trying to have their way with Nemaro. I am really sorry for Nemaro - he always seems to land in some troublesome and hilarious spots. Good luck with your computer.

Ah! WHAT? NNOOOooooOOOOO!!!!!!! How can you stop right there??? Gah I have to know what happens next >,< HAVE TO!!!! And on a side note, sorry about your poor computer :( I know I freaked out two weeks ago when my laptop battery died... No computer for a week while I waited for a non fried one to come in the mail.... NOT FUN! At least you have one to work on a bit <3

YES! Must know whats happening and, what will happen next!
So glad you added more ^-^
Sorry about your computer though! That's not good at all D:
Hope it is fixed quickly and, that you are able to review very soon.
Much love!
Spicy~