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mate. mate! that love bite was more than just a love bite. wow. MATE! but.. there's no mpreg in this.
huh. *shrugs* guess gods don't need kids yeah. XD

Goru seems to want to jump Nemaro. but. I don't think he will if Nemaro is not willing. and also Toru will make sure that doesn't happen.
I wonder thou. Will Horu be safe? after all, the Lord of the keep is no fool. what if he uses stone arrows, or metal ones. D= Horu will be in trouble.
And. what's with the 'doe-eyed' comments? So what if Nemaro has doe eyes? A specific trait only mate's have?

and what's that about Toru 'not leaving' Goru? a promise he made to stay by Goru's side? they're brothers. they are mates to each other? incest? XD somehow, this type of incest, i can handle... odd. I can't handle human incest well.

okay!

till later TH ;)

- nekoii

Well, I didn't see THAT one coming; both Goru and Toru are Horu's brothers!!! I should have guessed from the name! I hope Horu finds Nemaro, then he can explain what the hell Goru and Toru are talking about! lol

Poor, poor maro. He's so abused!
He's not gonna be raped, is he? ;-; OHNOEZ!

Lovelovelove this story. Greatly looking forward to the next installment! :D

~Bunni

chap 6

Nemaro, Gift to the Arcane God...
Nehman features and Kimarn eyes...
Nemaro Tesa du Arcana Johl...
Maro is someone who is more than special... does Horu know?

and there's more of these, 'gifts to the arcane god' ? kept away in temples for historians to enjoy...
some twisted temple-scening this is...


and now we go to the... dungeons... *gulps*

chap 7

Mosumato to the rescue~! I just have to hope for the best. after all, said water god just saved Maro's ass from being plugged with some odd oil dripping glass dildo.

so yeah... have faith! at least, at the very least, mosumato wouldnt voluntarily cause deliberate pain to Maro.

chapter 8.

OUH FRIEKIT!!!! I caught up?! DAMN! and here i was happily thinking I would still get the joy of reading and reading.

.... *grumbles* damn.... tsk... *pouts* ah well.

anyway.

WHAT

there's a chock full of "What"s to go around in this chapter.


what is it on his back that says he's Horu's?
a tatoo? a mark?
What are those two. God's right. WHAT type of god. What the heck are they doing there having 'fun'.
minor god's? That Goru seems to WANT Horu... but Horu probably won't be bending to some lesser god's will.
But now Goru has bait.... DAMN!

Maro just falls from one shit into another doesn't he.
And someone please tell me why the dear blue assed water god, did a half assed job of rescuing Maro?!
Maybe contaminated water disgusts him... or something...

I wonder what's keeping Horu from coming to get his Maro's sweet ass...
Deforestation?


Later~


- nekoii

chapter 1.

Gwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!! why does Nemaro's virginity have to be taken by that water god whom he does not like???
Mosumato better thank his lucky stars that nemaro was just sore afterward instead of bleeding. that would definitely get his blue behind in trouble with Horu...

speaking of Horu...

chapter 2.

can someone honestly get turned on by leather... that is one heck of a fetish... imagine maro get's himself a leather glove, specially for jerking off.... XDDDDD hahahhahahaha!!!

but thank god for Horu! Horu to the rescue!

and Horu's getting.... hmmm... possessive?

chap 3.

New thoughts indeed =D

at least something good came out of water god's troubles.
now we get maro getting the hots for his dear tree friend XD

and it's only about time before Horu catches on... =D

chap 4.


O___O! whooots. sharing is interesting eh... with this threesome going as such... and with Mosumato's warning...

I wonder if a time will come when we get a double anal *sparkly eyes*

but wait... it's time to cheer!!! Horu and Maro are together now! sorta! but still... YAY!!!! we have a tree loving couple!