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for Nature's Choice

by szaugg

schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol everyone truly wants Nemaru in some sort of sexual way. The only regret I have is that more wasn't done with the water tentacles. But then again, there is more of the story left so I can hope. I look forward to the next chapter!
person Lil Bit
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay I decided to review for the first time in years. I can't even begin to express how much I adore this story. It's like... you sucked a personal fantasy out of my head and put it into words. I wish I could be more eloquent, but sadly I'm fucking exhausted at the moment. =3 I love, love, love this story. I actually love all your stories, this one just has a special place in this pervert's heart. I'll beg any which way you want, I'll bake you cookies, do your laundry, anything at all; update this story soon. T_T I get so depressed when I see author's go months and months without a new update on a great story, because it's seems they all lose interest eventually and abandon stories. I can't write for shit, it's just not my forte. You've got quite a gift on your hands. I know it annoys some author's to be told to "update soon !!@@!!11". To be honest though, this story will never leave my bookmarks. I'll check it everyday, just like I do now, even if you go a year without updating. I know I will =( I can't give up on good stories. So, in short - DO YOUR BEST. I'm sure I'm not the only one that absolutely 100% adores you. Oh, and thanks for even putting Nature's Choice up at all. It's like a dream come true. (insert sappy romance music here)
person Aymery
schedule May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutley love your story but I just can't wait until Horu and Nemaro get back together in the story. Please don't take too long!
schedule May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9. Woot! I can't stop my drooling and nosebleed. More, more, more, more, more, more! It never hit me that Toru, Goru and Horu were all related. Yum~
person jdbbrz27
schedule May 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was so funny I laughed and giggled throughout most of it. The arguments between the gods and Nemaro's reactions and how he doesn't even know he's been mated now that is funny and boy does Horu have some explaining to do about that. Also what is the stuff going on between Horu and these two brothers that should be an interesting tale to tell in itself. Can't wait for the next update. Although I would love an update on UKE that would be awesome in my sad life but I'll try to wait patiently for it.
person Anon
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
what's horu doing?
ASOTA
person Kuromei
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so the fact that the two new gods' names rhymed with Horu's wasn't my imagination. XD

Still, I have to wonder if Mosumato will show up. I sort of doubt it, but it's still a possibility. And oh man, I'm expecting fireworks when Goru and Horu lock horns. XD

I can't wait for the next chapter! ^w^

person js
schedule May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading from your website when I noticed you had updated here. :) Great chapter, by the way.
person Perona
schedule May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooooo so good! I wonder what the brother's are gonna think about Matsumoto in the mix as well. And where is the big blue lecher anyway? I'm dying to know what happens next. Love this story <3 Anyway you're awesome, and I hope you feel better food poisoning (mild or otherwise) is never fun. Heal up so you can write more.
person Djargo
schedule May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Even your less than polished pieces are pure gems to me.

I can't believe Horu mated Nemaro without telling him. Was it intentional or was the sex so great he couldn't help himself^_^?

If Horu can get out of the castle,without his brothers help, and get to Nemaro it still seems like he'll have a butt-kicking waiting for him. Getting naughty with Goru's partner. How rude Horu!

Where's blue boy? He pulls Nemaro out of that dungeon and then nothing. Hope Mosumato didn't strain himself too bad cause he did seem to be struggling a little with the rescue.

This story just gets better and better. Looking forward to the next chapter.