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What exaclty happened between Hrou and Goru? And will Nemaru make things worse like he normally does with his fiery and unpredictable, yet adorable antics? I can't wait for the next chapter!

AMAZING!! I love this story, and Nemaro's longing for Horu really got me... :) Beautiful, all I can ask is that you keep up the good work, and perhaps think about condensing some of the narrative a little. There is sometimes quite a lot of thinking, and not a lot of doing, which can really drag the pace of the story down, people may lose interest, etc. But that's only a minor gripe in a grand scheme of excellence. :)

AAAAAAAAAAAARRGHHHH!!!! they were RIGHT THERE!!! RIGHT THERE1!!!
and you couldnt have let them reunite before the chapter ended!!!! CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!
oh god... that's juse perfect eh. you love doing this eh... argh.. oh god~~~ *headwall*

Poor Nemaro. worrying the whole day.... but gotta hand it to Horu. he got out of there fast!
i was expecting at least a few more days wait. but whoots!!!

at least, now we know Horu is safe. and back and kicking. :D
and have yet to seen skin of hide of his dear mate~

now. when they finally do reunite....
there's gonna be lotsa explaining to do~~~ hehehe~~~


- nekoii

Yay, Horu's here! XD And maybe the women! X3 Guess I'll have to wait and see until the next chapter to know for sure, though. -3-

Fight, fight! God fight! OMG This is gonna be intense. X3 I can't wait! ^w^ Especially if Nemaro and Horu are reunited. I really can't wait for that. ;3

Until next time! ^w^

holy shit! that was uber hot. I hadn't read the inuyasha story but i want to know. But this story was so awesomely sexy and funny. great job.

This chapter didn't feel too long at all; the events needed to be continuous in my mind. The terms of Nemaro's imprisonment, the relationship between him and his captors, the resolution, all belonged together. It is both concise and un-rushed. I think this being a tense situation, the pacing suits it. So good job!

My interest in the next chapter is very intense now!

And I loved Nemaro's little moments of sensuality and the tension with Toru. The attraction/fear was touching. Poor Nemaro, he seems so young in this chapter, with so much to face.

He is a latent god, though, isn't he? I suspect it when Toru talks about a time before his affinity awakened... not all the gods were born gods, were they? So is Nemaro's affinity to gemstones/precious metals?

aw dam i was hoping for the reunion but i guess ill have to wait T^T. BUT! this chapter was great nevertheless =]. keep up the wonderful work!! =D
-el

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! i love this story. i wonder if goru and toru know that nemaru got away, and if horu knows that he got out. he could have just had his plants find him and try to save him.
ASOTA

Nemaro is so tiresome. I could ignore how he couldn't back up his talk before, but this whole chapter was a study in it... ugh. Why does nearly every one of his sentences end with an exclamation mark! It's not cute, at all. I still haven't found a redeeming characteristic in him yet so I could care less how he ends up. Over half of me is hoping Horu and Mosumato will throw him out and find someone better.

ja;fjdsklf I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH.

I'm sorry you're not feeling well, and that things aren't going as nicely as you would like. I've never had surgery, unless you want to count getting wisdom teeth out, but even that was 100 percent unfun. :(

May life be shinier for you in the future ? <3