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This is really good! I'd love to see more. :3

Ooooh I love this story! So many possibilities and smutty boys :) i love the added "straight man turn gay" touch cos its so nice to see someone do something a little different. Hope you keep this updated!

the end of the first chapter completely reminds me of this joke in one of louis ck's acts when he talks about what hell must be like, and describes how a guy is raped by a demon who runs away laughing only to be told by someone else that he really didn't need to yield to him and that he's just some creep that hangs around with no authority. obviously your story has a much different and better version but the association made me laugh all the harder at poor nemaro being fooled. :P i LOVE the plot and horu's protectiveness is absolutely adorable! i wonder when nemaro will catch on. ;)

I love Last Pure Human and I'm so excited to see that you've started another story. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Just a few questions - Is Nemaro human? Or does this world not have humans - just gods and non-gods? Also what are Lords - are they like gods?

Tsk, Tsk. As expected, this is proving better than the original, largely because of your being able to unleash the characterization from Inu canon. You go girl! And I gotta say, I'm intrigued by this Nature world with an aristocracy so hot after pretty apprentice boys. As with "Pure Human", I do hope you plan to spend more time developing this world and not just pandering to your fans' prurient impulses. (Yes, yes, I'm as bad as the rest - else why would I be reading at this site?) What a lovely time you must have in your imagination!
Nonetheless, I must castigate you for NOT posting to stories started earlier. I swear, I'm DYING to know what happened after the monk took a wife!

This is, actually, probably better than the original. Because the characters are, frankly, delightfully your invention and only somewhat drawn on someone else (oh yes, I love how Miroku has morphed into a more comfortably amoral character). And yes, this was interesting for me to observe and distinquish. It feels like it's got more room for your imagination to play and expand upon; for example, I really want to see what you do with these three female characters - they shouldn't be mere window-dressing!
That said, I must protest at what I see as dicking around without actually updating your existing stories! And yes, I include "The Last Pure Human" in that tally. I know it is tough, but you owe it to your readers to give us more frequent updates. We LOVE your work; and it is agonizing to wait what is now months for a nibble of what, damn it, ends up being a bran-bar with chocolate chips and there's no damn chocolate in it!
Ooh! Where did that comment come from? I mean to say, I love everything you write but wouldn't it be nice to see your current works updated...

I am not familiar with Inuyasha, so I am glad you have made a converted fic that follows along the same lines! I have always enjoyed these reluctant-virgin-does-enjoy-being-taken-in-the-ass kind of stories, especially with such an open ending *hinthint*

Anyway, keep on writing, cause these one chapter fics are a nice way to pass the time waiting for the next chapter of The Last Pure Human ;)

Really great story! I hope this wasn´t the end! A second meeting would be funny....