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for Nature's Choice

by szaugg

person Jaden
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was hot and I loved that you had the two share maro i'm excited to see where you are going to take this story.
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my I’m so glad to see this story updated, actually I do the dance of joy whenever I see you updated any of your stories. Maro sounds so cute in the last chapter when he told Horu that maybe he wanted to top him, ha yeah and pigs fly. Horu knew exactly what Maro wanted. But that was such a cute line. I almost felt sorry for the water god. Anyway really loved the last chapter and I have to wonder if Horu marked Maro as his mate now and will not let Masumato take part anymore? Is Maro bonded to Horu now, and was it done on purpose so he could keep Maro for himself? Ohhhh I hope you update soon, I’m dying to find out and to see how Maro will take it. Because an angry Maro is just too adorable. Oh and something tells me that Masumato has no intention of giving up on his cute little Maro. Hahahaha
person Anon
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope horu will keep mosumato away from nemaro! please update soon!!!!
ASOTA
person graybird
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-crying tears of joy- this is my 2nd fav story of all time, my third is 'ice winds bride' 4th is 'opps' and related titels. but my first is 'the last pure human'. are u seeing a patern? and im not talking about just ur storys, i mean my favorite. all others conciderd and you win all . you. are. my. god. your storys have plot AND fantastic sex. added bonus, ORIGANAL AS FRICKIN FRICK. i love you and your brain. i do. i really really do... i feel i have made my point. tah
person dutsada
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow wow wow..,, Horu can be such a man despite his looks. Horu marked Mar as his own didn't. Boy can't wait to see Maro's reaction! More~~~
person Anon
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU for another chapter. I love love love this story!
person Jetfire
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I prefer this version to your Inuyasha version. Its great, please write more. PLEASE
person Rosei
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

Wow!! What a scene!!!
Maro has no idea what has hit him!! Could it be love/lust/new-found-prostate massage
by your favorite god?! And Mosumato just keeps on coming!!!! HA!!
Thanks for hot in-water threesome!!

Thanks,
R
person BennyPeace
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, that was good.
person Aleks
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really hot chapter!
I think these three should stick together! After a few fights who will get the ´small´ human...... :)