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for Nature's Choice

by szaugg

schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
+o+ oh my~ Everything about this is just so great. And Horu is absolutely hilarious in chapter 5 ;D Thank you for updating~
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see you are back at it. I just knew as soon as the girls saw the dress there was going to be trouble. Poor Horu he can't turn his back for one second without something going horribly wrong. LOL! I did enjoy his lame attempts to get out of the Lord's clutches, but why didn't he just take off the dress and say he was a guy so everyone could just apologize for the confusion and they could continue on their merry way?
person tf
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope Horu is able to save him; thanks for the update!
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want Horu too. I'm simply loving it. Go on!
person Gnome
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an absolutely wonderful chapter. The very idea of Nemaro in a dress has me smiling everytime I think about it. Thank you so much.
person HannaFO
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you sooo much for the update!!
That Maro *shakes head* He really doesn't get a break does he ?!! XD
The picture's were delicious!! :D
person littleolmee
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story of yours, and it makes me wonder why I didn't look at your profile to find it sooner. Like the other stories you've written this one is also a wonderful read. These characters are very interesting and have a lot of history that is really fun when the bits and pieces start coming out and you begin to piece some of their histories together. I love fantasy stories as much as sci-fi and the added slash is just makes it that much better. I have a feeling that their is more to what has happened between Horu and Nemaro than Nemaro realizes. I'm sure Horu is going to be fit to be tied when he finds out the Lord has Nemaro and I can't even imagine what will happen when the Lord finds out what is under that dress . . . then again the way things have been going for Nemaro the Lord probably won't even care, will probably like it even better, lol. So I take it that each god controls certain things. Horu being a god of plants has power over them, but he said he was going to see if they would lone him their power so does that mean even if he is the god of them his power really comes from them? Not really that he is over the plants. Is this really the last they will see of the god of water? Or will he be back? This is a really great story Twisted, thanks for sharing it and not forgetting it. Hope to see more from it in the future.

littleolmee
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person SaintD
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story. You have quite a bit of talent. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person Morganna
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh MIGOSHHHHHHHHH!!!!

First of all, you're part of my top 3 authors of orignal fiction (everywhere)!! A friend of mine talked me in reading your stories and i must tell she was right when she said i would not be deceived !!! Your stories are like so amzing and soooooooooo HHHHHHHHOOOOOOTTTTT !!!!
I have stated reading them since yesterday and i was like wooOOOO just incerdible !!!

Now to the story. I just love it (just as much as like .... no LOVE thelast pure human). I don't know about everyone else but the threesome part was >////< *fans herself* so hot !! I am not for threesome but here u have a new fan ; i think the three of them are good together. They are so good !!

Please update soon (for all your stories)!!
person Weirkat
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God, your stories are so HOT! I love your characters. They are so orginial and you really bring them to life.

I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Thanks!

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