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for Nature's Choice

by szaugg

schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_o' I didn't expect the dress... but its awesome! Now Huro is just about to get deliciously jealous and pissed... but what about the water god? When will he pop up to do what I know he;s setting out to do...??

Plz update!!
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Please update.
person Fate
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear TwistedHilarity.

You are a pure treasure. I have always loved yaoi and enjoyed many a story but out all of that I've read your writing is simple so good it's amazing. Its so good its inspired me to start writing again after I never thought I would!

Your characters are divine your stories both funny touching and your sex scenes are so hot I'm surprised they don't melt my computer screen.
But I'm sure you know that!

I hope to dear god that you never stop writing and continue to grace the world with your talents!
<3

person dut
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Horu! you are so sweet! What possessiveness... I am feeling excited to see that Maro is beginning to feel that he needs Horu more and more. He does get into trouble very often LOL.... Can;t wait to see a pissed of Horu. thanks for the update
person Seneschal
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooohh, I can't express how much I ADORE this story!! I always check back every few days for updates...or just to re-read it. I love Nemaro's reactions to Horu and Mosumato, and I also love how you don't let us know what's going on in their minds either. It adds something to the story. This latest chapter is deliciously evil!!! I adore it, even while the cliffhanger leaves me wanting to howl for more. I'm so excited to find out what will happen next---oh goodness, I haven't enjoyed a story this much since your fabulous "The Last Pure Human"!! Fantastic work, and I have to put in that I ADORE all your characters--especially those evil little witches! They're fabulous!
Thanks for writing this fantastic story (and get it published, woman!)
Much love,
Seneschal

P.S. I vote for hot sex with the Lord. And then Horu going all evil Nature God on his ass. And then hot angry sex. And then maybe some fight scenes. Fight scenes are such fun...but of course, I'm sure what I can imagine is nothing to what your fascinating, devious little brain will cook up! I wait in suspenseful agony.
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh no! how will the lord react when he finds out maro is a guy?? i fear that he will be raped. SAVE HIM HORU!!! and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! you left it at a cliff hanger and that's not nice!! :( i can't wait to read more!!!
ASOTA
person maloanne
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeepee an update!!! I love Nemaro personality. I love how horu has become possesive and protective. I would bet the two of them will have an hem, little explanation, when Nemaro get out of trouble...
I can't wait for the next chapter...
bye
M
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absoloutely love this! You are such an amazing writer, and you have brilliant characters that completely come to life. Very hot, too ;) Please continue :D
person wynja
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Just found this story today (all thanks to the update) and I have spent the whole afternoon reading it... now I'm starved... for a long overdue dinner (did I even have lunch? Can't remember) and more of the story! It's wonderful, it's funny and the characters are absolutely lovely! Oh, and the pics you linked to was great, by the way! I can't wait to see how this continues, I just hope I will soooon so I don't miss it...
All the best!
/Wynja
person miles
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor nemaro ^^ he's too beautiful ^^

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