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this fic is pretty much baller! very sexi sexi lol keep it up i love it. update SOON

Love this story!

Can't wait for more!!

I love your story, and in all honesty i wouldn't change a thing.
If you could can you email me when you finish with chapter 6???
My email is DemonMina@yahoo.com and I didn't think the oracle to speak weird,
I thought the echo was quite appropriate considering they were in a cave and she
was made of water so to speak.

This is fascinating. I love to read something that strings me along. Keep it up.

I love this, please continue

I think this story is beautifully written. You have a flare for the dramatic and erotic and mixed the two with skill that is very hard to come by. Please conintue writting, this is a wonderfull story and I'd hate to see it go unfinished. Who knows? Finish it and get an agent, send it to a publisher. I have a feeling this could get published if you continue writting it as well as you have been.

was thinking about this story the other day was glad to see you updated

i'm not to good of a reviewer my english and grammor is horrible and know nothing of writing
but maybe you'll get something from me telling you what i liked

i like the world you have created and started to show looking forward to seeing more of it and the people

of coarse like the angsty guys and looking forward to seeing their development
and the possibility of kuruk causing trouble

the back story of asheni did kuruk have anything to do with her death or was it a sickness or something

i like the spacing don't like one big long page of a paragraph

like the flow of the story and the wording
i may be lousy with my english but there is nothing worse than
trying to read an elementary level reading on an adult site
got me hooked i'll review other two chapters later though i did read them
and liked them also
looking forward to what the story will bring

this is pretty good