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January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
holy shit thats tight. great story, needs more....
schedule
July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a good erotic story. It does need a little more info about the main characters & it has some grammar & spelling mistakes, but it has the makings of a good juicy erotic story.
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked dat i was gettin into..im mad u ended it like dat...u did good....its a few grammar errors but other dan dat it was on point
schedule
July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story... The discriptions where ok but they were repeated. need some inperfections to capture the audience...
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice! - please do continue.... hahaha! That was a mean place to end it!