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*Throws a little celebration* yay i was right hehe. This was another great chapter! I wonder who's going to win! It's interesting to see Eydane is also in denial about his feelings. It makes me laugh. Update soon, I look forward to reading more.

Well, I'm waiting for Edyane and Iadden battle now. I hope their relationship will change to the next level....of hate, maybe T_T. Anyway, you're really great at making mystery. My heart beating fast and I REALLY want to read more. Hey, I have many questions. Is it okay to ask? First, who is the main character in this story? I always thought that it's Edyane and I start to think that it's maybe Iadden now. I really hope that it's Edyane. I REALLY LOVE HIM. I want to see him more!!! Second, about the heir prince thing, why Edyane calls himself Heir Prince and not CROWN PRINCE? What's the different between that two word? Third, the women shaman (I forget about her name, sorry), new character then. she has Important role (I think). Here, I'm babling about my thought. Well, that's how much I love your story. The women shaman goes to Edyane? The N'alaera hero versus Maguenta Heir. There are many thought in my brains. Keep it up. See you soon.

uh oh! iadden's going to win! i think iadden and edyane would make a cute couple once they were older, and i also think that, even though he's emotional, iadden is the type of guy that would want control in a relationship. he's too young right now anyway, but i just wanted to state my thoughts... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! i'll be waiting with bated breath!
ASOTA

I really like your story ^_^ The background information makes my head hurt sometimes O_o but not as bad as reading Lord of the Rings and I love that so You rock! ^_^

Hi, nice to meet you. The color of divinity is a great story. I love the political things. They look really real. You're a great author because it isn't an easy task. You know I always thing that our handsome prince, Edyane, IS the maguenta's heir and somehow he will end up together with Iadden. Well, may be I'm wrong. Sorry, See you soon

This is a really good story and I think you've been doing a great job. My guess as to why Iadden is against the prince and his brother getting together is because deep down he loves the prince but he's still too young to understand that heh. It will be interesting to see how the story continues to develop and I look forward to reading more.

Until the next update

Itara

I adore this story. The writing is interesting and intruiging. You've done a wonderful job with it, even down to the grammar (which is so hard to find in fanfics)

I'd say that your only problem is you've got a running 'wall of text' theme where you have massive paragraphs. The only reason why I say this is a problem is because it makes it much harder to read. Sometimes lines blur into each other or the reader may get frustrated and skip the paragraph all together. Otherwise everything is wonderful and I can't wait to see more.

Just to tell you that's incredibly brilliant!
I've been following this story since the beginning and I'm founding myself more and more enthralled...Please keep going!
You've the makings of a stunnig good novelist!

humbly
Phade from Italy

OOOOOOOOOO SO NICE YOU UPDATED!!!
I don´t know if it is my impression but it would be lovely if our ovely blue bird was to become our handsome prince promissed one!!! It would be really nice.

Well, wow, I really don't know what to say. This story is brilliant.

At first I thought it was just going to be a comfy, Prince falls in love with Father/King's magical fiancee creature thing. (Maybe creature thing aren't the right words. Rofl.)

But it's so detailed and godddd. You must've spent a lot of time with the whole..background stuff.

It's a bit complicated but it's good. I have to focus and think, two things which I hate to do. xD

But I reallly like it.

Anyways, is it just me, or are things moving a bit slowly? I don't really mind but it seems like this story is going to be reallllyyy long.

Which, I don't mind, but if you take a while to update... (which I don't think you'll do) I'll forget stuff. =O
And that'll suck, especially with such a wonderful, detailed story.

'Kay. I'll stop sucking up now. xD

But it's true.

Anyways, yeah.

I'm dead tired.

Brilliant story and update soon! =D

- Jenna

P.S.
Do you think in an A/N you could put some of the pronounciations of the names and places?
'Cause fantasy names are kinda hard to pronounce and I think I can only prounounce...one of your character's names. Rofl. Edyane's.
I think I can pronounce some of the other's, I'm just not sure if I'm pronouncing them correctly.