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Now you go back and you rewrite this one missy. Edyane does not give up Menea, Iadden is the Maguenta Heir, and and....Okay you did it perfectly the first time! I couldn't have done it better myself. I hate that things are changing and it was a bit arrogant of Edyane to figure he was the Hero. I mean he has good looks, money, power, charm, ability, and now he's going to be the hero too?! Where's the Kismet in that I ask you? I wanted little Iadden to be important and needed too. I love the little guy. I wonder if you are going to make them adversaries later on. I mean the way you walked us through Edyane's thoughts gave the impression that that wouldn't be very out of the realms of possibilities. I would rather see them make love not war, personally.LOL, thanks for the ch! Loved it!

Beautiful! and that bittersweet kiss at the end... "sigh"...I'm a hopeless romantic, you know, and this was simply...perfect :D
Can't wait for the next installment.

Have a nice week!
Phade

I know a lot of people had to hate the end of this chapter, but to me its only the end of another beginning. The infatuation between Milessin Meana and Prince ((caspian...haha)) Edyane has been completely killed. Although they will still like one another, they have decided that for their countries it is best not to be continued. Although I would have rather that they did not end it with a bittersweet kiss, I suppose Edyane did deserve the consolation prize. Meana gets an eternally loving husband and Edyane gets nothing.... yet.

Iadden walking in would have been hard since he had been spelled to sleep, but it still would have been the best ending to the chapter. Really hilarious to see the reaction on the young one's face. May have also jolted him into realizing that he does care for Edyane in some way. ((Jealousy is a nasty thing really))

I think Iadden's great power and strong will combined with the care he has for those around him are trying to tell us something. Perhaps I was right before, and he is the dark haired Ethen of lore. No one has been alive since the last one was found. It could just be what one would mistake as a normal Eth child turns out to be the dark haired Ethen. The other may just be a sham or a fake. Another creature posing as the Ethen, waiting to kill Iadden by the council's leave. I don't know, my mind is running away with me.

I do so hope you post another fabulous chapter soon! Like sooner than soon. Maybe now? or Now? OR NOW?!?!?!?!? Either way, I still love the story and can't wait for more. Ciao.

Well, bittersweet kiss. A good bye kiss then. Good bye love between Edyane and Meanea (a forbidden love for a cute couple). I love Meanea but I love Iadden more. Next time will be Edyane versus The Court or may be The Council OR...MAY BE...IADDEN!!!! Ha...ha..ha *laughing so hard* Iadden will certainly hate it. He just SO self confidence. I think Iadden will definitely want to go to war. Poor Edyane, it will be a hard mission. Hey, about Mageunta's heir...Iadden and then Edyane? It kinda difficult to understand But I think I know what you mean. Ah, well, we'll see next stories, right? Hope to see more soon. Always waiting for your stories. Ah, wait, final question, about the MPREG, Edyane ? Iadden? Meanea? You know, I CANNOT imagine Iadden getting pregnant. But I can imagine Edyane and Meanea. It will be so cute to see Edyane mith Iadden's baby. Just kidding, sorry, don't take it hard, akay? See you

I only have one word for you...... BEAUTIFUL.
I really like where thes story is heading too. I only wished that Iadden was bigger though.

Hope to read you soon

eww ewww ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww they can not kiss (I hate that stupid blond thing)

Iadden hsould walk in on them XD I love it when my little cutie pie is all hurt and angry.

Thanx a lot for the chapter I absolutly love it and I don't see how u can only have like5X reviews.

If it was up to me you would get like 100000000000000000000000XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX rewieues (sp?)

I find this story so endearing ad so well writen that for me is better than Harry Potter and even

Lord of the rings.

P.S I demand to know a lot more about how Iaden( I cna't spell his name if my life depended on it) feels

I lova ya lots and please don't stop writing (this story feels very alive to me and I would be sad it u stoped writing)

P.S.S sorry for the long rewieu I was just so happy to se a chapter Q_Q

Q_Q Love ya

Wonderful chapter! I savoured every single word!
Well, the two princes seem to be rather well matched...

I wondering which turn could their "relationship" take in the future...:)

Oh darn this is gonna suck. Too bad Edyane couldn't possibly make a sudden comeback and get a draw out of the situation. Like a sudden unleashing of power or something. Cause Iadden deserves to be a bit pissed off, he's too pleased with himself. Its kinda sickening makes me want to knock the child firmly in the head. Sorry thats mean... but true!

Well, New Chapter! Oh my God! I love it! I mean...the fight. Yes, THE FIGHT. What an awesome fight. Their relationship really go to the next level. For Iadden, it is the next level of rivalry. For Edyane (ironically), it is the next level of LOVE. Aww, to see that worried face of Edyane and it's for Iadden. Hahaha!!! Poor Edyane. I think Edyane's love will be one sided for a while. Torture! I love torture!*laughing really hard* You know what! I love Meanea but what I love the most are the many moment Edyane spent with Iadden. It's.....AWESOME....and.....FUNNY! Lovely couple! Now, I start to see where their relationship will go. Egoistic Iadden and....Posessive...Maybe. You know what I mean, right? I really think that Iadden will be that kind of easy jealous boyfriend. Anyway, good stories.
See you
Hopefully in the VERY NEAR future
Boring_neko19

I thought it was really well written! I loved the little moment that Iadden and Eydane shared before their fight. Made me go aww! I wonder what new developments you will be adding! I can't wait to find out!