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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!
Just wanted to drop you a note to let you know how much I'm enjoying your story! (:
Just wanted to drop you a note to let you know how much I'm enjoying your story! (:
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story! We need more! ;)
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I love the characters, your plot line, everything. I was hoping maybe Maddy would be a little older for Trevor. hahaha.
I can't wait until your next update!!
I can't wait until your next update!!
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good job. I hope nothing to serious is happening to Trevor. Maybe he's just starting off slow? I wonder if Casey will ever get to meet her half brother and sister? Keep up the good work. And what will be Jeremy's punishment?
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woww... I started reading this story sooo long ago, and I signed up for the notification list, but I just couldn't be bothered to continue with it.
I have just now come to realize how stupid I was for that.
This is turning out to be a truly amazing story!
One thing though, a little critique for you, I think that your characters stutter a bit too much.
I can understand Casey most of the time because she gets it pretty tough and she's a bit of an awkward person, but sometimes it's just a little over the top.
And Lucas stuttering just sort of contradicts his whole persona, I feel..
Maybe it's different in America, but I personally have never heard any body stutter that much.
Aaanyway, keep it up! Can't wait for the following chapter :)
I have just now come to realize how stupid I was for that.
This is turning out to be a truly amazing story!
One thing though, a little critique for you, I think that your characters stutter a bit too much.
I can understand Casey most of the time because she gets it pretty tough and she's a bit of an awkward person, but sometimes it's just a little over the top.
And Lucas stuttering just sort of contradicts his whole persona, I feel..
Maybe it's different in America, but I personally have never heard any body stutter that much.
Aaanyway, keep it up! Can't wait for the following chapter :)
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol greta chappy cant wait for more! update soon!!!!! :)
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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey Gatsby
So I just found your story, and I had to tell you how much I'm loving it!!!!! I love the characters, I love the intrigue, and I love that you have a mailing list (which ive just joined -yay!). Cant wait for the next update
So I just found your story, and I had to tell you how much I'm loving it!!!!! I love the characters, I love the intrigue, and I love that you have a mailing list (which ive just joined -yay!). Cant wait for the next update
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February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I always love to see Casey interacting with her brothers but I'm even more happy to see that each time she sees Lucas, there is more ease and affection between them. I'm hoping we'll see more of Rory in chapter 17! He seems to be great for Casey, as he's so different to everyone she's known before. I'm afraid of what might happen to their relationship after Scarlet arrives, but I definitely have to keep reading to find out~ :D
Thanks again for this story!! Oh, and thanks for the e-mail update too. I'm so glad you have a mailing list!
Thanks again for this story!! Oh, and thanks for the e-mail update too. I'm so glad you have a mailing list!
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG THIS IS LIKE ONE OF THE BEST VAMPIRE STORIES I READ. I AM SO HYPED AFTER THIS CHAPPY. I CANNOT WAIT TILL NEXT UPDATE!UPDATE SOON! :)
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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say "Thanks." I was seeking a good read and had been running into disappointment after disappointment till I hit on this. The tone of voice has a realistic feel, the characters interact well with each other, and the plot makes you keep reading, getting sucked into the story. Please continue your great work, I look forward to reading more soon.