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ahahahhahaha! for some reason I'm finding this hilarious! Rory is so deep-in-shit right now, and who knows what'll happen when the others find out. lol! great sory, waiting on the next chapter eagerly! :)

I love the length of your chapters. If anything, I would love them longer, but I'm certainly not going to beg for it because damn it, I can't write long chapters for the life of me. XPPPP

So your chapters make me happy. If they were 500 words long, I'd still be pretty happy. :)

So far, so good to me! I've never really seen anything like this, so I'm enjoying this very much. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Alas, you must update! I found this story eons ago, and just now realized that you had updated a chapter. When are you officially going to pick this back up? I honestly can't wait. I hope to hear from you soon! :)

i have a feeling there's more to the agreement between luke and rory...but what? hah...more incentive to read the rest of your story yes? :)

Meeps! I'm in total love with your story! Can't see anything to critic, so keep up the good work and can't wait till you post the next chapter! X3 <3

great that theres a new chapter. but um it doesn't make any sense and doesn't seem to connect with the last one. sorry its got me completely confused like somthing was left off like what was the pact made???????????

Yay! Both stories got updated! Awesome work.

I am so happy you didn't just forget about this story. I really want to thank you for that.

Now, for your lastest chapter, 4, I thought it was great. I loved everthing about it. I loved that not all brothers went into the house so easily. I love that Casey was in shock, but still manage to speak her anger at Lucas. And love the way Rory kept to defend himself.

Although, I would like to know how Lucas got Casey to go along with it. I mean it goes from her yelling at Lucas to her being at her place, in her bedroom with Rory. How or Why did she say yes.

Of course, the ending was wonderful - I felt so sorry for her, I felt just as scared as she did. I'm glad she refused his conforts, his massaging or as she said "fake foreplay". In the end she seemed to be just as scared as she was when she was mugged.

I wonder is he going to bit her every night, she can't live with that much blood lose. Also, what if he just takes advantage and sleeps with her or worse makes her a vampire. Let hope these are some of the "assurances" Lucas got.

There are still lots of question and I will be waiting for all the answers. Please update soon.

oh I'm so happy there was a new chapter. Excellent, even if u left off when it was getting good :D I cant wait for the next update for this story!