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for Bad Moon Rising

by GuilandRos

schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've got to say, diner fights are the funniest to witness, and I've seen a 2AM fight or two in my travels. Anyway, thank you for another great chapter! I'm very curious to find out the reason why Casey has to be Rory's feeder, but I know all will be revealed in time.
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just got caught up on this story and I am really enjoying it!
person Yvonne
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello, this is the first time I review one of your stories but I have actually read Speak of the Devil prior to Bad moon Rising. Both stories are extremely good and original. It's refreshing to read supernatural fiction that isn't extremely creepy and goth. Continue writing as you have because it's quite entertaining. I'm especially looking forward to learning more about Casey's and Lucas's relationship and how that has to with the pack's deal with a vampire. It's kind of hard to believe that in a town full of werewolves Casey's mom didn't have an affair with one of them and that Casey is the only human that is associated with the pack. One question, was Casey's mom a human also? or does it take two werewolves to create another werewolf?
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Keep writing!
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please? I forgot to say please.
person kar666
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
soo good whoot :D please update soon
person meow
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Length is good! I love and hate cliff hangers. :P MOAR please!
person twilight
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the length of the chapters are good you dont have to many spaces between the sentences but i just wish you could have went into description about the bite more but other than that i see potential
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! Poor Casey, she's having a bit of a bad week, isn't she :)
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
glad their long only wish they were longer

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