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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! an update i'm curious though as to why Rory picked up on her distress when her family, with the super acute hearing did not...but the sex scene between them is definitely a must. ^__^
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Another new chapter! :)
Why do I get the feeling that her real rather isn't just a 'normal' human ;)
I don't know about anyone else, but I wouldn't be unopposed to seeing them get a bit more friendly ;)
Why do I get the feeling that her real rather isn't just a 'normal' human ;)
I don't know about anyone else, but I wouldn't be unopposed to seeing them get a bit more friendly ;)
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Casey is starting to admit what really bothering her...even if Rory had to force the answers out of her. And I get the feeling that the mysterious Scarlet will play some sort of role in this story, anyone named Scarlet is bound to be an interesting character.
Once again, another lovely chapter! And I think you pulled off the intimate scene between Rory and Casey just fine...I'm not too worried about a sex scene. :)
Once again, another lovely chapter! And I think you pulled off the intimate scene between Rory and Casey just fine...I'm not too worried about a sex scene. :)
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter. It gave a real good look into Casey. I wonder if Lucas and his family really meant to make her not partof them or whether it is her own impression based on her lack of self worth. She seems to see herself as just a mistake and doesnt think others can lvoe her.
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated!!!!
The chapter was great. The interaction between Casey and the other characters is fluid.
Sex between Casey and Rory would be good (of course), but maybe we should wait awhile. For her to find out why he is in town, why he made the deal with Lucas. Give Casey a chance to see if she can 'think of something' for Rory to do for her, let them get to know each other better.
Hope your muse lets you update soon (no pressure!!!).
The chapter was great. The interaction between Casey and the other characters is fluid.
Sex between Casey and Rory would be good (of course), but maybe we should wait awhile. For her to find out why he is in town, why he made the deal with Lucas. Give Casey a chance to see if she can 'think of something' for Rory to do for her, let them get to know each other better.
Hope your muse lets you update soon (no pressure!!!).
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 5 and 6 are just GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!!
Were to begin, OK - so Rory just did one of his -listen to my voice- things to get Casey to stop fighting, agree, and get her home. What a cheater!! Then there is her deal, stay in the pack or get out of the pack. Well, if she gets out - I think she should think about getting out of the town as well. I mean what can she possibly do in a town where the regular human population is on the endanger species list. Add to that she will not have protection from the pack - I really don't see how she has manage to stay now. She's not going to any kind of college, is she going to be a waitress all her life, but she is young and still has time. At one part your writing made me feel bad for her again. When she's crying in the bathroom, not able to really talk to Jordan is just heartbreaking.
Then you turn completely around a put humor EVERYWHERE. Starting with the insults she calls him - that can't be given to his "gender". To Jordan's "at least he could have a heart beat". To Rory saying if he wasn't dead already he would be now. To everyone calling him "grave dirt". To finally the ENTIRE hospital scene, when he has to explain how to fix his wound, while poor Casey has to say how they are not "dating". I could actually feel Rory's complete fustration that no one likes him or thinks of him as any kind of living being. Everyone wants him dead and kepts reminding him that he is already dead - even the doctor. Who wasn't trying to be mean, just couldn't understand how dead flesh could rot. It was all just hilarious.
The fight scene was small, but good and at least Jordan got a bit in or out of Rory. Although, I not sure if I agree that a vampire is stronger than a werewolf.
One question - why is daddy not tell everyone that Casey is just doing something for him? She is looking like the traitor while supposedly "dating" a dead guy and he's not defender her.
Well the updates were just great. I so need another chapter (or two), so please update soon.
Were to begin, OK - so Rory just did one of his -listen to my voice- things to get Casey to stop fighting, agree, and get her home. What a cheater!! Then there is her deal, stay in the pack or get out of the pack. Well, if she gets out - I think she should think about getting out of the town as well. I mean what can she possibly do in a town where the regular human population is on the endanger species list. Add to that she will not have protection from the pack - I really don't see how she has manage to stay now. She's not going to any kind of college, is she going to be a waitress all her life, but she is young and still has time. At one part your writing made me feel bad for her again. When she's crying in the bathroom, not able to really talk to Jordan is just heartbreaking.
Then you turn completely around a put humor EVERYWHERE. Starting with the insults she calls him - that can't be given to his "gender". To Jordan's "at least he could have a heart beat". To Rory saying if he wasn't dead already he would be now. To everyone calling him "grave dirt". To finally the ENTIRE hospital scene, when he has to explain how to fix his wound, while poor Casey has to say how they are not "dating". I could actually feel Rory's complete fustration that no one likes him or thinks of him as any kind of living being. Everyone wants him dead and kepts reminding him that he is already dead - even the doctor. Who wasn't trying to be mean, just couldn't understand how dead flesh could rot. It was all just hilarious.
The fight scene was small, but good and at least Jordan got a bit in or out of Rory. Although, I not sure if I agree that a vampire is stronger than a werewolf.
One question - why is daddy not tell everyone that Casey is just doing something for him? She is looking like the traitor while supposedly "dating" a dead guy and he's not defender her.
Well the updates were just great. I so need another chapter (or two), so please update soon.
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can;t wait for the next chapter......love the plot....your damn good plzzz post the nxt ch....can hardly wait
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story, just like your last.
Keep up the amazing work!!!
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Keep up the amazing work!!!
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*bounces up and down happily* OMG two new chapters. *giggles like a school girl.* great chapters. i am just loving her brother being all protective, while her father is all cold its just so great and perfect.
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter.Lots of detale. hope you up date sooooo.