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Wowowowow this was toching hot sexy and all of the good things every fic should be! i hope you write a sequel or something to let us know whathappened to these guys!

I liked it a lot. I loved your language and the way your described the entire scene. I liked the interaction, which was very engaging and draws you in. You have a really rich way of descriving feeling in a non-vulgar way and still keep that tantalising tastyness of erotica. I really loved it. I do hope you'll write a sequel. Well, I'll go and read more of your stuff.

Hakucho :)

great! Hey! Why don't you turn it into series? It's too good to become one shot. I want to see what happen between the two Kings who love each other. War because of love. I don't like that but I like your story.

Wow I cant tell you how moved I am by the absolute depth in this story. It was so absolutely wonderful how you made me feel their pain, love, and pleasure. I really wish you would re-consider and make this a full out story. A one-shot seems like it's taking away all the potential there is here. Of course, nothing should be done if you dont feel it. That's us fans wanting more of the good stuff. I can't believe you only have two reviews on this though. Don't worry though, it doesnt mean it's not good, it means that people are lazy. One-shots always get less reviews. I read My Desire, because if it was anything like this, I wanted to read more! I was a bit dissapointed though. I really didn't feel as connected to the characters as I did in this one-shot. I feel like your writing skills have improved greatly since then, and it would be good for you to re-write those chapters and then continue it. Well. This was meant for me to tell you that I adored this one-shot. It made my night... because it's so dark outside. LOL. But I hope you will maybe one day consider making a full blown out story out of this!

Wow. This was absolutely beautiful. I'd love to know what happens next to these people, assuming you plan to bring them back in any of your other stories. Thank you for writing this.

This was great! Even though it was a total excuse for smut- which I have no problem with!- it also conveyed feelings, too. My only bit of constructive criticism has to do with the summary... you said "desperateness," or something in it... but I think you might have meant desperation. Just some constructive criticism. I really did think the story was awesome, though.

Cheers!
-moi

I LOVE it!

Absolutely beautiful, romantic yet full of tragic and oh so smutty. I love how you brought characterization into this as well, I like the two of them. I think you just made me aware of my kink with royalty, geez. XD