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for .Lamia II

by keithcompany

schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg thank you. this story is always so very entertaining for me.
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another section to an already humorous and enlightening story. I was really impressed. The use of harpy doves was a nice touch. Tell me, how much research into the hybrids, as they are called in your work, is done? The reason I ask is because you seem very well-versed in hybrids, their history, and their sexuality.

Where grammar and spelling are concerned, I saw no mistakes.

Excellent job! Well done!
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow a four chapter update!!! i like it...keep it up...i think i can see where jennifer's going
person too tired to think of a name
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was hot! I read Lamia because its a very interesting and well written story, even though many of the chapters didn't quite turn me on. However this chapter definitely did! Looking forward to reading more!
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh. Dear. ... Haven't they got into a bit of a pickle? I cant wait till you release the next chapter!
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you mean you didnt fall off of the face of the earth? yay!!! ooh centaurs..cool keep it up
person too tired to think of a name
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! you updated! i cant wait to read the rest of this segement. You are really a good writer, Lamia, Faemiliar, Little V, all of those stories just sucked me in.
person ToBeConfirmed
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! finally a new installment! Excelent quality writing as usual, a Standard I expect from you these days! I wonder what twists and turns this section will take!!!

person too tired to thinl of a name
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the Lamia series is my favorite series from you, though I like all of your fics that I've read. I wish you would continue with it.
person Knorg
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This stuff is brilliant.