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person lavcea
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWW HELL NAW! It is getting really deep and i can't BELIEVE you stopped! I can't watch - it's like a trainwreck...does this chick not realize she's going to have to deal with Claudius, Marcus, Armor, X, Sex, Skell, and Azreal. On top of THAT, she's going to have to deal with the Imperial Alphas - Male and Female - cause her lover is what's his face. And if by some ellusive chance of fate - she's going to have to deal w/the winglets and the pups. Homegirl don't have a ghost of a chance at survival! I thought it was the cutest when Skell said, "Well winglet, your papa's a wingnut." That was hilarious. Now, hurry and update because I can't take it any longer. I had to read it twice! -L
person mystic87
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was evil! What a cliffy! I know I haven't reviewed for a while, but after that cliffy I just had to insert my input! Great story, amazing storyline and I'm waiting anxiously! By the love I absolutely LOVE Claudius! Does he come in a plushie form? *Hugs Claudius plushie* Awwww
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!!! What a way to leave it! I can't wait to find out what happens. I have an idea of who the captive is.... Keep up the awesome writing! I love it. :)
person Spirit
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear... Raissa's figured it all out.. Oh my gosh. Please update soon Kiix because I don't know if I can handle this cliffie!!

Great writing, as usual.. Are there really only 2 chapter and an epilogue left? :( :( makes me sad.. what am I going to read!?!??! This has been my favorite story on here. Ever.

~Spiritxx
person Laur
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn...that girl is smart????

Love the new chapter!!!!
person lone_child
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thankies for another awesome chapter~~ it was so sweet!
person k
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's crying time again ... in a good way. I loved loved absolutely loved that chapter!

schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yep she is deffently Sex's daughter. Wow I was expecting that from Lex maybe but Rassia? Keep the chapters comin!
person lavcea
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how hot was skell and blueberry? fyi - i LOVE the nicknames these guys have. And how adorable was Rassia and Skell? Those babiesa aren't dumb. they know what's going on. That is just to adorable an update. Keep em coming and if i haven't said it before, congrats on your contract. Can't wait to see this series in paperback on my shelf. Great job! -L
person steph291
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch. 45 - oh, what a smart kid! hey, wasn't Lanseng supposed to be overly well endowed or something?