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schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Payback's a bitch!
Hope you update soon you evil, evil writer, leaving us readers in these cliffs...
person Laur
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH SHIT!!!
DAMN KIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIX! CLIFFHANGER!!!!

GIUHI;DUFGHSDIUFGPIEFGIUSHBFIBG *MY ANGER*

UPDATE SOOON!
person Laur
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Raissa is so smart and adorable. She is going to be a handful when she grows up.

How did the chick get Claudia? Wasn't she protected by the House?
person Cindyip
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Gasp* But how did she get Claudia with all those Lycan around? O.O
person lone_child
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! you're so evil!! cliffieeeeee *dies*

thankies for another awesome chapter!
person Spirit
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EVILNESS!!!
Wonderful chapter, but EVIL ENDING!! More! Please! Now!

~Spiritxx
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! Nu Uh!!! Looks like X is gonna have to kick some serious ass! Waiting for the next update.
person Tash
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG How did that lady get to claudia? Wasn't she protected by the loyal AND lycan? X is going to kill that lady or Claudius whoever gets there first. She better not hurt Claudia. Hurry and put the next chapter up!

ps I loved how claudius came to the High Council dressed. I adore him for that.
person Blaze
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!!!! poor Claudia, how did that woman get her?

and you better be typing, lol, that was pure evil to leave off there! :D
person AsyenMari
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*stands up and applauds* YEAH BUDDY!!! If that wasn't a bitch slap I don't know what is!!! Im back and reviewing!!! I knew you'd get the offer to be published kiix, congratulations!!!! *ponders to self* "Hmm, tasteful literary porn I can take to work in book form...." *drools* Can't wait!!!

I love these last few chapters, very nicely done. I have such trouble bringing a chapter to an ending much less what is it 4 complete books? Absolute props go to you for being a fantastic writer!!!

KK on to the chapters I missed: I love the smexy scene between Skell and Lanseng, that was too sweet and long overdue. And Raissa's little insight and acceptance of Skell was perfect--welcome into the house Skell!

Fantabulous job as always- I have difficulty commenting on just one aspect when reviewing your written work. Most of the time it ends up some sort of greatful drabble, a "wow....dat was weally good..." , or an overly educated "I appreciate that an author of your stature could shine so brightly...". You know, that sort of thing. But all in all I absolutely love the stuff you've written.
Asyen